The Chosen One

By DV_tweetsie

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This is a complete fictional story that happens in the alternate timeline and universe having no resemblance... More

Prologue
Chapter-1 Their first meet
Chapter 2 - Kulu kulu venpani pola
Chapter 3 - Thread of magic
Chapter 4 - Sivaangi ma
Chapter 5 - Inimel Dhaan
Chapter 6 - Will you?
Chapter 7 - And the game begins
Chapter 8 - Past and Present
Chapter 9 -Beach, beach, beach
Chapter 10 - The colors of Magic
Chapter 11: Ashwineyy, the Cooker
Chapter 12 - Tough love
Chapter 13 - Gift from the universe
Chapter 14 - The puzzle pieces
Chapter 15 - It's broken
Chapter 16 - All ties cut
Chapter 17 - Consent
Chapter 18 - Like parents, like daughters
Chapter 19 - It's a promise
Chapter 20 - One Father to another
Chapter 21 - Another Mother
Chapter 22-Time to heal
Chapter 23 - The challenge
Chapter 24 Wolf in sheep clothes
Chapter 25 - Romance is in the air
Chapter 26 - it's time for truth.
Chapter 27 - Heart to heart
Author's note
Chapter 28 - The word
Chapter 29 - Queen to the rescue
Chapter 30 - The Decision
Chapter 31 - Family is everything
Chapter 32 - The final knot
Chapter 33 - Trust is must
Chapter 34 - Fate's game play
Chapter 35 - Time for some reconciliation
Chapter 36 - Time for family
Chapter 37 - #Ashaangi
Chapter 38 - A day before the big day
Chapter 39 - The D-day
Chapter 40 - Surprise Surprise.
Chapter 41 - The beginning
Chapter 42 - His Sun, Her Ocean
New Story Alert!!!!
Chapter 43 - His heart hers alone
Chapter: 44 - The Good in everyone
Chapter 45 - His achievement, their achievement
Chapter 46- Superheroes
Chapter 47 - Her concerns, his priority
Chapter 48 - Engagement
Epilogue

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By DV_tweetsie

As you all know this story is coming to an end.
So I am here genuinely looking for feedback.

The plot behind this story was not simple and straightforward, it was extremely complicated for the following reasons

1. Writing about premarital sex without making the readers feel 'eeyeeewww' was not easy at all.
2. Writing Sivaathmika's role was the toughest, I decided she is going to be both your love and hate worthy, it is easy to make the readers love a person or hate a person but this love hate thing was extremely difficult.
3. Akash's character, he is not a typical villain but a male ego loaded man who became a villain when his favourite person got snatched from him. I wanted to give him a proper closure too.
4. Justifying Sivaangi and Ashwin's actions circling their break up
5. Them falling for each other again..
6. And lastly I am not much for unrealistic turn over of events, I like the character and the scenarios as normal and simple as possible and not some god send super heroes, so that readers can connect with them. So writing it that way and still giving the readers an elated and happiness feel when they succeed was difficult.

Now I want you all to tell me how much have I achieved in the above steps.

I request honest feed back both positive and negative so that I can use them to better myself in my coming projects.

It doesn't matter how many more I write this one will always be my special and thank you all from the bottom of my heart for making it so special for me..

I don't get paid for writing here, yet I dedicate 2-3 hours of my almost every day is because of the love I received from you all .

Now shoot your questions, doubts and feedbacks, I will reply to every single comment that is posted here be it positive or negative.

Love,

DV

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