Agree?

By CloudyWriter56

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Just a feel good story about two souls-Aditya and Sithara who wouldn't have met if not for a little twist of... More

Characters
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Epilogue
Thank you note

Chapter 29

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By CloudyWriter56


Adi and Tara served the food

Her parents started eating. He was nervous about their remarks

Tara nudged him
"Neenga ethu panalum super ah irukum. Free ah vidunga"

Adi smiled "Okay ma"

Tara's mom looked at Adi. "Super ah samaikra Adi. Enaku poramai laam ila but light ah poramai thaan" she said making him laugh

He looked at her father
"Adi na vena un veetla vanthu stay panikava. Daily un food sapdanum pola iruku" he said earning a glare from Tara's mom

Now it was their turn to eat

Tara was about to sit

"Sithara balcony polam va"

Tara knew why he called her there but still she asked

"En?"

"I want you to have more happy memories there. First time en cooking try panra la"

"Thanks Adi"

They shifted to the balcony

The weather was perfect. Not too hot, not too cold

Adi let her have the first bite, she signalled "Super" with her hands

Adi started eating

Out of nowhere Tara asked

"Is this a date?"

Adi smiled at her

"Only if you want it to be"

"I do"

"Our first date" he looked down and blushed

"But.." She nervously fiddled with her spoon

"I know ma! Don't worry na ipo solla maaten and neeyum solanum nu avasiyam ila"

She looked at him in amazement

"I'm very lucky. Na solamale elathaiyum purinjikura Adi"

"Ellame purinjipen nu ennala promise pana mudiyathu but if something makes you uncomfortable I promise I'll try my best to put you at ease"

There he goes, and now it is one less fear for her

"I trust you"

"Thank you ma. I know how hard it must have been. Na break pana maaten"

"Okayy. But enna solrathu if someone asks what relationship we share?"

"We know what we are. Mathavanga kita solanum nu avasiyam ila. Our friends and family ku kooda theriyum we share a special equation nu. But namma relationship ah society kaaga oru label podanum nu avasiyam ila. According to them marriage is the ultimate relationship. Athuku munnadi ethayum respect pana maatanga. Apdi pata mindset irukapo why bother fitting into labels. Aniku nee sonathu thaan, what we have now- this is more like us"

"You never fail to surprise me Adi. Ivlo depth ulla oru person ah first time pakuren. And thank you for respecting my fears without making me voice them out"

"I respect you a lot Sithara. Feelings thaandi un mela enaku mariyathai uhm iruku"

"I have a question Adi. Might sound too serious but take it lightly okay?"

"Kelu"

"You said society ku marriage is the ultimate relationship. Namma relationship uhm oru naal antha point ah reach panum la? Isn't that where we are headed?"

"I want to spend my life with you but athuku munnadi there are stages we'll cross la. Ipo thaan first date vanthirukom. You're still 23, nee innum work la mela varanum. Nanum konjam life la innum forward ah move pananum. So to answer your question, yes that is where we are headed, there's no rush. Avlo thaan"

"You make it sound simple"

"It can be simple if we stop worrying about the future so much. Ipo iniku it is our first date, weather is great, balcony la we're eating the food I cooked for us. Someday we'll do this in our own home. Apovum ithe smile nama kita irukum. Believe in that and now start enjoying this moment please?"

Tara smiled widely

He took his spoon and fed him

"Happy first date Adi"

He blushed

He fed her as well

"Happy first date Sithara. Many more to come"

They clinked their water glasses

....

They came back, washed the dishes and Adi sat on the couch.

"Inga va" he called Tara who was drying her hand

She sat by him and snuggled

Adi smirked
"Inga va nu thaane sonen, enna pillow mathiri use panitu iruke"

"Pchh summa iru you're warm and comfortable"

She realized what she said

"Huh maybe you do remind me of my pillow" she laughed

Adi pretended to be angry at that statement

She was looking up at him

"Adi moonja en urr nu vechiruka. Smileeee"

Adi didn't react

Tara said lots of mokkai jokes but he didn't budge

Out of the blue she stood up and started singing

"Sirikadhey sirikadhey siripale mayakathey" she took his hand and twirled herself

He couldn't pretend any longer

He stood up with a smile as she continued to run around him and sing

Tara stopped

"Neeyum paadu"

"Na paadna nalla irukathu"

"Super ah irukum. Paadunga pleasee"

"Okay oru line nee oru line na. Deal?"

"Deal"

He cleared his throat and continued where she left

"Manam vitu unmai mattum unnodu pesida vendum"

"Nee ketkum kaadhalai alli un mel naan poosida vendum" She looked into his eyes

"Naan kanum otrai kanavai un kaathila olarida vendum"

"Ennai meeri unnidam mayangum ennai naan-"

He closed her mouth knowing what the next line is

"Thaduka laam vendam" he said in a quiet voice, almost a whisper

These weren't just lyrics anymore

Tara blushed

"This is our song from now on" she announced

"Okay ma" he gladly agreed

"Pathiya Adi, sirikadhey nu paadi unna sirika vechiten"

"Haha unnala mattum thaan ipdi laam pana mudiyum" he gave her a hifi

....

AN:

A little nervous about this one!
I hope it made sense👀

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