Sundeen

By tryhardc0mical

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First Story! This story is about a couple of students who start the 10th grade at Sundeen High in a closed-do... More

Chapter 1 - Makoto Masami
Chapter 2 - Chemistry Class Gone Wrong
Chapter 3 - Algebra Class with an Eccentric
Chapter 4 - English Class is a Mess
Chapter 5 - Makato vs Dominic
Chapter 6 - Karen Breakout
Chapter 7 - Just Stopping By
Chapter 8 - What Happened?
Chapter 9 - Dominic in Dilemma
Chapter 10 - End of the Beginning
Chapter 11 - Class Jaunt
Chapter 12 - Gallery
Chapter 13 - Antique Dialect
Chapter 14 - Calamity
Chapter 15 - Indispensable Action
Chapter 16 - Apprehensive
Chapter 17 - Illegal Item
Chapter 18 - Sneaking Away
Chapter 19 - Big Brother
Chapter 20 - Cemetery
Chapter 21 - Scattering Around
Chapter 22 - Connecting the Dots
Chapter 23 - Three Helpers
Chapter 24 - Sellout
Chapter 25 - Jolt in the Air
Chapter 26 - Yoshi vs Killer
Chapter 27 - Reveal
Chapter 28 - Post-Incident
Chapter 29 - Holly Henderson
Chapter 30 - Kishi and Okada
Chapter 31 - To Call Forth a Storm
Chapter 32 - Call of Distress
Chapter 33 - Skeptical
Chapter 34 - Assemblage
Chapter 35 - Devastating
Chapter 36 - Pinpoint
Chapter 37 - Seige
Chapter 38 - Discourse
Chapter 39 - Beginning of the End
Chapter 40 - The History of Sundeen
Chapter 41 - September 3 (Part 1)
Chapter 42 - September 3 (Part 2)
Chapter 43 - September 3 (Part 3)
Chapter 44 - September 3 (Part 4)
Chapter 45 - September 3 (Part 5)
Chapter 46 - September 3 (Part 6)
Chapter 47 - September 3 (Part 7)
Chapter 48 - September 3 (Part 8)
Chapter 49 - September 3 (Part 9)
Chapter 50 - September 3 (Part 10)
Chapter 51 - September 3 (Part 11)
Chapter 52 - September 3 (Part 12)
Chapter 53 - September 3 (Part 13)
Chapter 54 - September 3 (Part 14)
Chapter 55 - September 3 (Part 15)
Chapter 56 - September 3 (Part 16)
Chapter 57 - September 3 (Part 17)
Chapter 58 - September 3 (Part 18)
Chapter 59 - September 3 (Part 19)
Chapter 60 - September 3 (Part 20)
Chapter 61 - September 3 (Part 21)
Chapter 62 - September 3 (Part 22)
Chapter 64 - End of 400 Years of War
Chapter 65 - The Hero of Sundeen

Chapter 63 - September 3 (Part 23)

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By tryhardc0mical

12:03 AM - 5 hours and 57 minutes until the Sundeen Fest.

Holly, Logan, Joey, and Lyla were in a room on the second floor of the Library.

LOGAN: What's happening? Where did they go?

LYLA: It's so dark in here.

HOLLY: They went up to the roof!

Joey laughed, Holly looked at him.

HOLLY: What's so funny?

JOEY: It's just that, everytime Makoto does something. He's in an all-action type guy.

HOLLY: What do you mean?

JOEY: Makoto's always taking a step forward in life and challenges anything to cross his way. He's gotten through everything easily. When we found out there was a killer, Makoto wasnt scared at all. When his brother died, he got through it in just under a day!

HOLLY: What!

Joey smirked.

JOEY: Makoto said that this school year was going to be a movie! Heh, this oughta be a damn novel!

Makoto and Riley were on opposite sides of the roof. Both looked around, the atmosphere felt different in every direction.

RILEY: You feel that Makoto, this wasn't by me. This was by you, you did this. People are dying, because of you. If you had never made that announcement, the village would not be in chaos.

Makoto looked toward West, where the park, the high school, and the town center was.

RILEY: ...... I could never have done what you did. You stood up for all of Sundeen. Heh, today's the 400th Anniversary of Sundeen. If I hadn't have known any better. I'd say this was rigged.

MAKOTO: ....... no...

Riley laughed, and took a step closer to Makoto.

RILEY: Makoto, you're a really interesting individual. I'd be honored...

Makoto was in a trance.

RILEY: ...to kill you.

Riley slowly walked towards Makoto. Makoto took a step back. Riley stopped, then ran towards Makoto at full speed.

MAKOTO: RILEY!

RILEY: MAKOTO!

ANNE: RILEY!

Riley stopped running just when he got close enough to Makoto to push him off. Makoto ran to the other side. Standing at the front entrance, below the two was Anne Richardson. Riley's wife, Logan's mother.

RILEY: Anne!

ANNE: I knew it was you, Riley, ever since the killing of that teacher, I had known all along.

RILEY: A- ANNE!

MAKOTO: !!

Makoto slowly took steps back to the ladder back in the library.

RILEY: ANNE YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND!

Tears started forming from Riley's eyes. Same for Anne's too.

ANNE: Where is my son, Logan!

Riley took a step back, then turned around to Makoto.

RILEY: YOU!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! EVERYTHING IS YOUR FAULT!!

MAKOTO: Shit!

Makoto dropped down the ladder down to the second floor.

RILEY: ......

Makoto found Joey and the others.

JOEY: I was gonna come up there... but... uh

HOLLY: Makoto!

They heard screams from outside, Makoto was the closest to the stairs, so he ran downstairs and ran outside.

What he sees next is unbelievable.

Makoto finds Riley's dead body on the ground.

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