Naruto : Neglected

By tanjirop

1M 15.5K 10.1K

On 10th October Minato and Kushina were blessed with three children. Narumi and Mito and Naruto. Mito and Nar... More

Chapter 1 : Prologue
Chapter 2 : Innocence
Chapter 3 : Friends
Chapter 4 : Graduation Day
Chapter 5 : Teams
Chapter 6 : Test
Chapter 7 : Sufferings
Chapter 8 : Trouble Sunday
Chapter 9 : Wave Mission
Chapter 10 : Train!
Chapter 11 : Team 11 Vs Zabuza
Chapter 12 : Aftermath
Chapter 13 : Know your place
Chapter 14 : Rejection of apology
Chapter 15 : Chunin Exam - I
Chapter 16 : Chunin Exams - II
Chapter 17 : Chunin Exam - III
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22 :
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25 : Yakumo
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35 : END Of Konaha
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45 - War Arc
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53

Chapter 30

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By tanjirop


Naruto jumped on ground and saw Shisui and Deidara standing.

"Shisui-nii.." said Naruto softly.

Deidara jaw hit ground while Naruto's Team was about to Faint.

Shisui boinked Naruto's head and Naruto rubbed with it with Anime Tears.

"BOKAAAA! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BECOME ULTIMATE HERO SHINOBI!"

"BUT I AM FOLLOWING YOUR FOOTSTEPS!"

Shisui did anime cry while muttering 'Adorable Little Brothers imitating big brothers!'

 Team Konaha arrived at scene. Naruto and Shisui was on Alert.

Kushina looked at Naruto. Looking in Memories and real life are two different things. 

He has turned out to be Handsome man. And powerful.

"Naru-"

"Shisui." said Sasuke icily.

"Sasuke.." said Shisui with smile.

"Naruto! Get away from him!" said Obito.

"Didn't I told you all those years ago? Shut up Uchiha!" said Naruto.

"What's your problem with me!?" asked Obito.

"Naruto..Are you siding Shisui?" asked Sasuke.

"Yeah. Why?" asked Naruto.

"You..You B-Bastard..He killed my father..You were my-"

"That fucker deserves to die. He was nothing but piece of shit. The disgust he smelled was annoying!" said Naruto.

"Naru-" 

Karin Captured Sasuke in Chakra Chain and threw him in Jungle. Kushina attacked Karin with a punch but Karin caught it and punched her on face.

"Uzumaki Karin.."

"Uzumaki Kushina.."

Naruto came in front of Karin and Obito came in front of Kushina.

"Shisui-ni..Where is Gaara?" asked Naruto.

"In our Base. We have captured him." said Shisui.

"Alright. Will he live..?" asked Shisui.

"Yes-"

"He is lying. Jiriaya spy network told they are making a powerful weapon by extracting-"

"That white haired bitch? Please. As if that Born Failure can do a shit. Ego is filled in Konaha nin.." scoffed Naruto.

"Don't insult him-" Mito was cut by Naruto.

"Or what are you gonna do princess? Perhaps lay on Minato's bed and act like a cheap slut and beg for Fame?" said Naruto.

"Naruto! That's enough! I will not tolerate single thing about sensei-"

Obito was send flying at tree. Before Obito can even reach, Naruto smashed a punch on his stomach. Obito coughed blood.

Naruto caught Obito's punch and kicked him in chin. 

"Fire Style : Eto Burn!" said Naruto as his palm was red and Naruto slammed it on Obito's chest.

Naruto kept punching Obito until Blood came out.

"Obito!" shouted Rin. Karin charged at Rin and started fighting her.

Kushina's neck felt cold when Shisui put a Kunai on her throat. 

"Don't Move."

Mito was about to protect her mother when Deidara punched her on Face and send her flying at ground.

Sasuke suddenly came behind Shisui with Chidori but He was captured by snakes all of the sudden.

Everyone stopped and looked at Sasuke.

"Yo! Dango-lover is here!" said Anko.

"Anko!" said Naruto happily. Naruto shunshin near Anko.

"We are leaving." said Anko seriously.

"Wait! You have to return Gaara!" said Mito. Deidara smashes his foot on her face and says 'shh'.

"This Bitch...I swear I will deal with her later.." said Naruto.

"Naruto! I know you and I aren't on good terms! But! Shisui murdered a innocent man! How can you side him! Naruto! You betrayed Leaf! Despite what Leaf did to you..You cannot deny we were comrades!" shouted Sasuke in frustration.

Everyone became silent.

"Konaha betrayed me." said Naruto coldly.

Everyone flinched.

"Naruto..Come back..I beg you..Come back Home..Minato and I miss you..Please.." begged Kushina with tears.

"No. I am going with Anko." said Naruto.

"Please!" said Mito.

"Weren't you going to save Gaara!?" asked Sakura.

"No. I never said that. I wanted to find him. Not save him." said Naruto.

"You cold bastard. How can you be such a basta-"

Sakura suddenly felt herself choke blood. Naruto slammed his foot on her chest and Sakura cried in pain.

"Sakura!" shouted Sasuke.

Naruto slammed his foot on her left hand Area with Chakra.

Crack!

Sakura cried in pain.

"AHHHH!" 

"Naruto! That's enough!!" shouted Obito. His body took too much Damage from Naruto's fight and he couldn't move.

Naruto pointed his hand towards her and flickered his fingers. A bolt of lightning Run from his hands to Sakura's Body.

Naruto kept doing it until Sakura started crying.

"Mebuki Haruno. That's what your mother's name right? One of Councilor. Wonder how will she reach.." said Naruto evilly.

Naruto took out a Kunai and charged it with Air. In one swipe He cut All Sakura's Hair.

"Perfect!" said Naruto in manic tone.

"STOP IT NARUTO!!" cried Sasuke and Kushina was crying. Rin was in horror.

Naruto kept punching her face until it was swollen. Naruto took out a bottle a liquid and poured it on her face.

"WHAT IS IT!?" asked Rin in rage.

"Urine." said Naruto as laughed.

"NARUTO! YOU BASTARD!" said Kushina.

Naruto put his hands on her palms and did a Finjutsu. Naruto grinned evily.

"What did you do!?" asked Rin in fear.

Naruto looked at Mito who was looking at him in rage.

He walked towards her and kneel at her level. Deidara was still holding her.

"Mito-nee-san..You look so attractive.." said Naruto as kissed Mito in lips.

"W-W-W-What are you doing!?" asked Kushina. 

Mito felt disgusted when she enjoyed the kiss herself...Naruto kissed her chin and Mito moaned out.

"My sweet big sister..I can't help but love you.." said Naruto.

"I look almost like Minato..and you look almost like Kushina..Let's kill them and replace them..We will peacefully together..Narumi will be our maid.." said Naruto as he smiled with red eye which  showed childishness and insanity.

Naruto stood and sighted.

"Let's go everyone.." said Naruto. Naruto shunshined away. 

Karin Tayuya Jugo Shisui Deidara and Anko also left the area quickly.

"Sakura!!" everyone shouted.

Obito activated his Mangekyou sharingan and grabbed them togther.

He used Kamui to teleport.



Ame
(Borders)

It was raining

Shisui slapped Naruto on face.

"What the hell is wrong with you!? Are you Insane!?!" asked Shisui in fury.

"Naruto.." said Anko softly.

Everyone was quiet. Especially Tayuya.

'Damn I told him not to do it! It is because of 'that'!' thought Kurama

"Who is that?" asked Naruto ignoring Shisui.

Shisui looked at that direction.

"Nagato." said Shisui.

Nagato looked at them and joined them.

Nagato said nothing and opened a portal from his Rinnegan and everyone entered.

They entered a Room with many people. 

"Naruto!" said Suigetsu happily.

"Uzumaki Naruto. Welcome." said Yahiko.

Naruto looked at Yahiko with red eyes.

"Konan..Naruto will go through Mental Therapy.." said Anko.

Konan nodded. Shisui dragged Naruto with Konan into other room.

"What happened..?" asked Kisame.

"Well.." said Anko.


Konaha 

Ino ran in Hospital with tears.

'Sakura!'

Every Jonin and Chunin was there.

Ino ran into her Room and saw everyone.

Sasuke looked lifeless and Narumi was blank. Mito wasn't in room. Shikamaru looked in pissed and Choji wasn't eating.

Kiba looked as if want to murder someone while Hinata looked in disbelieve. Kushina was looking down while Rin's eye were red.

"Is it true..?" asked Ino.

Rin nodded.

"Naruto..that dirty asshole.." said Ino in anger.

"He has gone too far.." said Shikamaru calmly.

Kakashi and Tsunade entered room.

Kakashi looked at Sakura and looked wide-eye.

"What did he do..?" asked Kakashi.

"Broke her bones. Removed her Hairs. Tortured her. Threw Urine of her. Voila ted her own Sister." said Sasuke.

Kakashi fist gripped and Tsuande looked in rage at what happened to her apprentice.

"Tsuande-sama..Naruto has left a message for you..In Sakura's Body.." said Rin.

Everyone eye widen in horror.

"Don't worry..It's removable.." said Rin quickly.

Everyone sighted.

"On her left breast...It was imprinted with Ink..saying.." said Rin nervously.

"What?" asked Tsuande.

"Dan sucked them...❤️"

"And on left breast he wrote...'Nawaki sucked them...❤️'"

Tsuande broke the wall in rage.

"UZUMAKI NARUTO!!" roared Tsuande.

Everyone left after a while. The only one left were Kushina and Rin.

"K-Kushina..nee-chan.." said Obito as finally woke up.

"Obito!" said Kushina and Rin.

"N-Naruto..isn't normal.." said Obito in fear.

"What..?" asked Kushina.

"Kushina-nee-chan..He was...scary..I was so scared when he was fighting me..He is a Devil..I was  soo..sniff...scared..His eye were..so dangerous..sniff.." said Obito as he started crying.

Rin stood in horror. Last time Obito cried was during Bridge when Kakashi almost died.

Kushina hugged Obito.

"Shh..Big sister Kushina will always protect you.." said Kushina as comforted Obito.

Jiraiya stood shocked and gulped.


Council Room

"Kill the Demon!" said Council.

"He attacked our Shinobi!"

"Monster!"

"He rape-"

"Silence!!!!!!!!" roared Minato.

Everyone became quiet.

"Naruto Uzumaki will be punished accordingly. However..My question is...Who is too blame..?" asked Minato.

Everyone became silent.

"B-But my daughter..was raped-"

"Naruto tortured her. Humiliated her. But he didn't fall to do that. So who told you such lies..?" asked Minato.

"D-D-Doctors.."

Minato threw files on table and Mebuki read them.

"These are reports made by Rin and Tsuande..Best Medics in the Konaha..There is no mention of such things.." said Minato.


Akatsuki Base  

Naruto stood in room with Konan.

"We will start now.."

"I am mentally stable.." said Naruto.

"1st question..."

Naruto sighed.



Gaara woke up. First thing he realized he is large Area. It was Grass on ground. 

"You're awake.." said A woman.

Gaara looked at her.

"Who are you..?"

"Glad to meet you Kazekage-sama..I am Yugito..2 Tail Jinjuriki.." said Yugito.

"They captured you..?" asked Gaara.

"Yes. From a Month. We have Toilet facility. Comfortable beds. Clothes will available..Food will be Three times day. Books and games. Literally everything.." said Yugito.

"Are they going to kill us..?" asked Gaara.

"I don't know. I tried to escape but no use. Even Biju Chakra is useless.." said Yugito.


"The moment Uzumaki Naruto is allowed to leave..We will start with our plans. Suigetsu, Tayuya , Jugo-"

"He means you guys will be helping us and are part of Akatsuki. Since Anko is one of us..Welcome.." said Nagato.

"Dammit Nagato! Let me act cool! What's your problem!?' shouted Yahiko.

Everyone sweat-dropped.

"You know I am curious..Why do you have Metal Arm..?" asked Suigetsu.

"I lost in Battle.." said Yahiko darkly.

"Still..Naruto did that..It's..kind of disturbing.." said Guren.

"He hates Konaha.." said Yahiko.

"So we do.." said Nagato.

"Let's party! We have new members!" said Anko.

"YES!- I mean yes. We shall arrange-" Yahiko was cut by Nagato.

"Let's go!" said Nagato.

"DAMMIT! NAGATOOOOOO!"




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