Naruto : Neglected

By tanjirop

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On 10th October Minato and Kushina were blessed with three children. Narumi and Mito and Naruto. Mito and Nar... More

Chapter 1 : Prologue
Chapter 2 : Innocence
Chapter 3 : Friends
Chapter 4 : Graduation Day
Chapter 5 : Teams
Chapter 7 : Sufferings
Chapter 8 : Trouble Sunday
Chapter 9 : Wave Mission
Chapter 10 : Train!
Chapter 11 : Team 11 Vs Zabuza
Chapter 12 : Aftermath
Chapter 13 : Know your place
Chapter 14 : Rejection of apology
Chapter 15 : Chunin Exam - I
Chapter 16 : Chunin Exams - II
Chapter 17 : Chunin Exam - III
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22 :
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25 : Yakumo
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35 : END Of Konaha
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45 - War Arc
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53

Chapter 6 : Test

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By tanjirop


Naruto walked behind Satsuki and Yakumo who were following Rin.

They finally reached Ground 11. Rin turned around and looked at them.

"Alright! I have two bells on my waist..You have three hours to take these bells from me.." said Rin.

"Sensei..but there is two bells.." said Yakumo. Satsuki nodded.

"That's because..one of you is going back into academy.." said Rin coldly.

Naruto eye widen slightly at that. Yakumo and Satsuki clenched their fists.

"Start!" shouted Rin.

Yakumo and Satsuki quickly disappeared hidden in Bushes. However Naruto stayed where he was.

Rin looked at him sadly

'I must go easy on him..He wasn't trained..Well he did ask me and I denied. I will make up to you and make you strongest Genin..I swear Naruto..I will be you're role-model-'

Naruto took a breath and did some stretches.

"Aren't you weird Naru-kun? You should hide and-"

"No point. You're a Jonin. I bet you already know where those two are.." said Naruto calmly.

Rin internally nodded.

"Not to mention No. 3 is inside you..gives you a slight advantage.." said Naruto.

Rin froze in her place. Her eye darted at him.

'H-He knows? It's a SSS-class...'

"Fire Style : Great Fire Ball Jutsu!" Naruto shouted as he weaved hang signs. A large Fire Ball was launched at Rin. Rin's eye widen. 

'Elemental Jutsu!?'

Rin doged the fire Ball easily. Naruto didn't wasted a time and launched at her. He tried to kick her on face but she slammed him on ground-

Poof!

Rin eye narrowed

'Kage Bunshin no jutsu..?'

Suddenly five Naruto attacked her from behind. Three of them were destroyed but fourth managed to kick her in stomach. She flipped back and was about to fall when Naruto's fifth clone caught her.

"Naru-"

Suddenly Real Naruto came in front of her and weaved hand-signs.

"Wind Style : Wind Bullet!"

A pressure of wind was launched towards Rin. Rin kicked Naruto's clone and countered with her own Jutsu.

"Wind Style : Wind Arrow!"

A small arrow of Wind shaped in air and countered Naruto's Wind Bullet. The shock-wave Threw Naruto on ground.

Naruto looked Rin coming at him. 

'Tch..So that's a power of Jonin..'

'He's strong compared to other kids on his age..' said Isobu.

'Agreed..And he became strong on his own..' said Rin.


Naruto stood up and Shunshin away. 

Rin eye narrowed. 

'So you hide now?'

Rin tried to sense him but was shocked when she couldn't.

'Isobu..This boy is just-'

'I know..He will cause trouble in future..Mark my words..'

Rin looked at trees and decided to test her other students.



"No way..Dead-last is..this strong..?" said Satsuki.

'He was hiding his true power...damn..'

"I wonder if he really his dead-last..?" asked Rin. 

Satsuki's eye widen and she turned around just to get Punched by Rin.

Satsuki coughed and stood up.

"Fire Release : Great Fireball Technique!" shouted Satsuki.

Rin smirked. All uchiha are knows this Basic Jutsu.

'Obito used when Minato-sensei testes us..'

Rin weaved hand-signs.

'Water Style : Water Palm Blade!"

A big blade of Water was launched in Air and countered Fire Ball.

Satsuki ran towards Rin and tried to punch her but her fist was caught and she was sended flying at Tree. Her body slammed against Tree.

'She's good..But her Taijutsu lacks..and her speed..'

Rin turned to see Naruto and Yakumo standing behind her. She was suprised to see them.

'Did they finally saw meaning-'

"Team-work..Right?" asked Naruto.

Rin nodded and smiled.

"Good..Who figured..?" asked Rin.

"Naruto did.." admitted Yakumo. Then suddenly Yakumo launched herself at Rin. Rin was shocked by her strength but it was still nothing in front of her.

She blocked her fist with clashing her own fist. She was about to attack Yakumo when Naruto kicked at her left leg. Naruto's eye widen when she didn't even flinched. He looked up to see Rin's smirking.

Satsuki tried to kick her on head but she doged easily and grabbed her and threw on Yakumo. Naruto clones launched themselves at Rin and engaged  her  in Taijutsu.

Naruto's clone grabbed her left hand while other tried to Kick her back but Rin used her strength to overpower them and destroyed them. 

Satsuki threw Kunai at her but she doged them in mid air.

Suddenly Obito came in front of her.

"Obito?" asked Rin in suprise.

"Rin! Did-"

Release!

Rin broke the Genjutsu and she smirked at Yakumo who was standing behind her. 

Naruto and Satsuki came beside her. 

'So this is the power of a Jonin...' thought Satsuki and Yakumo.

"You pass.." said Rin.

"W-What!?" asked Satsuki.

"Didn't you figure out true meaning..?" asked Rin.

"No..I just went with flow..?" said Satsuki nervously. 

Rin hugged her.

"Yes! That's more good! Team 11 is official! Meet me tomorrow for Training! 8 am!" said Rin as she disappeared.  

"I passed!" shouted Yakumo. Satsuki smiled widely.

Naruto smiled a bit. He sighted and begin to go on his own way.

"Naruto?" asked Satsuki. Naruto looked at her.

"Yeah..?" asked Naruto blankly.

"Do you want to go to eat somewhere? As in Team?" asked Satsuki.

Yakumo smiled and nodded.

"Ramen.." said Naruto quietly.

They stood shock but nodded happily.

They walked together and started talking among themselves.


Hokage Office 

All Jonin were sitting in row. Minato and Kushina was behind Hokage Desk while All thee Sanin along with third Hokage were at one side of the room.

Kakashi entered room.

"Yo."

"You're late." deadplanted Asuma. Other snickered.

"Gomen Gomen..A black cat-"

"Yeah Kakashi..We know.." said Minato. Kakashi sat down and started reading Icha-Icha paradise.

Rin came through door.

"Am I late!?" asked Rin.

"Rin?' asked Kushina in surprised tone.

"Sorry Kushina-see and Minato-sensei..It took a bit longer.." said Rin

"No! It's okay! You must have a reason! Unlike some Masked man..." said Minato tauntingly.

Kakashi was crying anime tears.

"Team 1..Fail.."

"Team 2..Fail.."

"Team 3..Fail.."

"Team 4..Fail.."

"Team 5..Fail.."

"Team 6..Fail.."

"Team 7..pass.." said Kakashi.

"I see-WHAT!?" asked everyone.

Kakashi looked at them and sighted.

"Yea..they passed. Uchiha Sasuke is well trained and is average in terms of Genin while Haruno Sakura is a fan girl But she has very good Potential for becoming Great Shinobi..Mito Uzumaki Kamikaze..She is strong and co-operative..Sasuke lacks motivation to work together but It's fixed now.."

Everyone nodded.

"Team 8 pass..Hinata Hyuga is well in Taijutsu and has calm personalty..Her sensory ability due to her Doujutsu is good and she is willing to help and co-operate..Shino is a quite boy who lacks in Taijutsu but is good in controlling insect..Narumi Uzumaki Namikaze has a good nature and she exceeds in  Taijutsu and Ninjutsu but her Genjutsu ability lacks...But I can help there.." said Kurenai.

Kushina and Minato had their chest proud at their daughter's achievement. Jiraiya and Tsuande were also proud. Kakashi and Rin were happy.

"Team 10...Shikamaru is lazy boy but his IQ is something that cannot be underestimated..His Shadow Manipulation is fine..Taijutsu lacks but I can work on that..Kiba is loud and Brash but is strong..Ino is a fangirl but her Taijutsu is fine...Choji is a good hearted boy but gets angry when someone calls him fat..This team needs most of work.." said Asuma. 

Everyone pity Asuma.

"Team 11..pass..Uchiha Satsuki is good in Uchiha Taijutsu and Her Ninjutsu is good...She unlike her brother isn't a brooder..She has a lot of potential..Yakumo Kurama..her Genjutsu almost got me..Her Taijutsu is surprisingly well-"

"Hokage-sama! That girl shouldn't become a shinobi-"

"Kurenai..Stop..You're crushing a girl's dream..I will not tolerate any shit against my student..." said Rin coldly. She and Kurenai had a glaring match.

"Stop you both!" said Minato.

"-Uzumaki Namikaze Naruto...He is.."

Everyone sighed. They knew he was dead-last. Some people in room felt guilty. Including Kakashi. No guilty didn't explain how they were feeling/

"Totally awesome..His Taijutsu was badass..His physical strength was good..And let me add without Chakra..His Ninjutsu including high elemental Jutsu..He has shown Fire Element and Wind Element..He can make many Kage Bunshin..He was the on who recognized True meaning of test..and I am sure he was holding back.." said Rin.

Everyone has wide eye.

"No..way.." said Kurenai her jaw hanging.

Kakashi eye narrowed in shock. 

'It seems like..We have a prodigy..'

Minato and Kushina froze in their place. No way..They wanted to train their son and get closer to him but kami knows how..He is strong as hell..Guilt..

It broke their heart that it wasn't them who trained him. 

Jiraiya gritted his teeth. He was thinking of making him apprentice but...What is this? His plan to make come closer is..destroyed..

Tsunade was planning on Investigating on this.. 

"I see.." said Minato in guilt tone.

"And Sensei..There is something you must know.." said Rin nervously.

"What?" asked Jiraiya.

"Everyone you may leave except Kakashi Hatake , Kurenai , Asuma.." said Minato.

The room now consisted of Kakashi, Kurenai Asuma Rin and Three Sannin Minato and Kushina and Third Hokage.

"He knows about me being Jinchuriki of Isobu.." said Rin

"What!?" asked everyone including Hiruzen.

Rin nodded.

"Damn..Just how.." said Kakashi.

"That's what I want to know.." asked Kushina.

"Minato..Talk with Naruto..Now.." said Tsuande seriously.

"No." said Minato.

"What!? Why!?" asked Tsuande.

"Time..His anger is obvious with us..He might end up becoming more pissed..." said Minato.

"Hm..Naruto.." said Jiraiya.

'I named him..yet I..Didn't do anything for him..'




'Naruto...What are you planning...?' asked Kurama

'Hm..? I was just made-'

'Don't joke around! Now they will definitely get suspicious of you!'

'Chill...'



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