Just One Chance(Rewritten) Ry...

By shawdss

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Aaliyah Fenty is a 21year old student currently attending the USC campus. She was born in the limestone islan... More

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Part 10- Nae Day
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Explanation/SpoilerπŸ‘€
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Character Update
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Aaliyah POV

"I will never understand how you eat like a starved cow and you stay slim. I mean seriously your stomach is always flat." Nae fussed.

"Must run in the family because that body of her mother's? whew chile." Shar added

"My mom's a dancer so she's supposed to be fit. I'm just naturally like this y'all been knew."

"Hmm so what you had to tell us anyway?" Nae asked.

The guys had left the hotel a while back leaving just us girls with the place to ourselves. We went live on Nae's instagram for a while then spent some time in the pool before making our way back to our rooms. After a nice warm shower I'm now in the living room supposedly watching a movie with them.

"It's news I just don't know what you guys gon say."

"You got our full attention Ms.Fenty"

"Jordan and I...are dating."

"You're what?!" Shar freaked out.

"I don't know why your slow ass is surprised. I peeped the little change between y'all. He commenting under your posts alot more, when he flirts you actually blush like a schoolgirl and y'all be staying in y'all room alot. What y'all be doing fuccin?"

"Damn Nae, why you so blunt!?" Shar shouted.

"Um no we definitely not doing that. We just be chilling mostly, kissing too but mostly chilling. It's all fresh so none of that anytime soon."

"So how's it happen?" Shar asked.

That's when I gave them the story—I mean the entire breakdown from our first kiss to the visit to his Aunt. I even mentioned how confused I was and what lead me to just going with the flow. As the supporting friends that they are they were happy and worried for me. It was soon after a breakup but we all hope for the best. Nae might've thrown a few threats in there incase Jordan fucc up but she wouldn't be our Naenae if she didn't.

"So we got a few days left together. What y'all trynna do today?" I asked them.

"Well like I been saying, I'm going with Derek to Chris Brown's show tonight.You could've tagged along but wanna be boring and fake and leave me by myself."

"You say that like I won't be the only one not going." I chuckled.

"Don't forget Grans wanna see you before you leave Nae."

"Yeah I remember Shar and don't change the subject."

"I would've come but I ain't feeling 100% just yet, these cramps still Killing me Nae. The last thing I'm trynna do is be at a loud ass concert." I told her.

"Okay okay fine I guess I get it. You're excused but I still wish you would come."

"You guys will enjoy yourself without me. Now in the meantime, I am up for some last minute shopping or we could just stay in all day." I suggested.

"Shopping sounds fine to me. Let me go get ready."

*Calling Best Brother💙*

Yoww

Happy birthday Bighead!

Thanks Lily,wassup?

Why your ex side chick being messy this early in the day

I knew you was calling bout some shit man. I told her to take that pic down already

Okay but y'all look mighty cozy in them pics for real and they don't look like old pics

Aight bout a year ago or so when Lori and I broke up, we got together for a little while. It ain't last long but I ain't messing with shawty like that no more

I know you ain't messing with her Chris, you wouldn't be that dumb but she really making it look some typa way. I would've been mad tight if I was Lori

You know Lori don't make much shit phase her. She ain't care at all especially since I'm laid up under her

Oh.. oop my bad bro. Well I got something I wanna tell you real quick anyway

What's that?

Jordan and I are together

I know that.. and Reginae,Shar and their boyfriends too

No Chris. I mean we're together together as in dating

How you go on vacation single and end up in a relationship?

Good question for the both of us

How that happen for real and I thought yo ass was staying single

Shit happens I guess. I just wasn't sure how you'd react

You grown, you know what you doing. Jordan been fam, it a little weird him dating my sis but y'all good

Hmm Okay then, well since that's off my chest imma leave you to Lori now

Please do

Ew nasty ass, bye Christian

*Call Ended*

"I don't ever wanna be hooked on a nigga so bad that I stay embarassing myself with em psychotic behavior."

"You talking bout that girl that posted your brother?"

"Shar she delusional asf. Bro in a whole ass relationship that everybody knows about yet she up on the gram like they had something special. It was never that deep. She was nothing but someone to fallback on when he and Lori went through their bs."

"Damn..well if she gon get the picture eventually. Some chicks just real slow."

"More like real dumb but let me not judge. If I ever end up in a situation like that y'all better beat my ass."

"You won't ever end up like that though so you good." She was very right about that too. I be too quick to leave niggas alone.

Danny POV

"What you got going on today?"

"Nothing really, Zina wanted me to come over while she babysit her little cousin. I might be at with Eric tonight. He got a show in Orlando and I got nothing else doing so why not." I shrugged.

"Just make sure you get your packing done before hand. We don't need you running around like a headless chicken on the morning of our flight."

"Yeah yeah I know Dave."

After taking in some vitamin D, I headed back inside the house. I played a while with Kairi then we watched a few cartoon movies together. Zina came to pick me up not too long after that but luckily I was already dressed and ready to go.


"Damn who's the fine chocolate mami?" Zee softly asked as who I knew to be Derek Yeezy's girlfriend.

Zina,Fefe and I were backstage awaiting the start of Eric's show. Derek Yeezy and his girlfriend Reginae just walked in. Along side Shar who I think is Nae's bestie and two other guys. Derek got a few tracks with Eric so I know he's here to perform them with him. As for his girlfriend, I recognize her from instagram. Like me she got about 200k followers on the gram. I can't lie she's really pretty in person too.

"She straight and taken babe, sorry." I said to Zee as she walked by.

Half an hour later we were enjoying the show singing and recording ourselves and the show. Eric was putting on a great performance as usual. His dance moves never cease to impress me and the backup dancers are definitely giving life too.

Even Reginae and Shar are here with us. Once Yeezy joined Eric on stage, I walked up to introduce myself and Nae stuck by us since. Her bestfriend Shar was stuck on her man like glue but eventually she came over for a little while. We were all having a good time though and Nae actually seems like a fun chick. We already followed each other on the gram and went live together showing the guys performing in between. We had over 50k people tuned in to our live. Shit, I felt like a celebrity for a hot minute.

Lori POV

"You're finally dressed."

"Safi I'm sure nobody's there yet anyway so there's really no need to rush out."

"We're twenty minutes late."

"And we still got to wait for Chris to come scoop us up anyway. I see you forgot that important part right."

My boyfriend is celebrating his birthday in the club tonight. Unfortunately for me, my whip been down for a few days now so he gotta come pick us up. Knowing Chris got no sense of time his ass gon be late so I might as well get comfortable and chill for the while.

"You want a drink? It'll give you a little buzz."

Just as she was about to answer me a knock came through on the door.

"Looks like you spoke too soon." She said grabbing her bag already knowing it was Chris. Sure enough when I swung the door open it was him. I locked my apartment and we hopped in his whip only to see Jon in there too. We took off and made it to the club in little to no time.

"You finally posted the video." I said to Kiki seeing her post.

"Bout damn time right?"

"Don't tell me y'all asses worn out already."

"Safi I had a long day."

"That's cool and all sis but it's your man birthday. Nobody supposed to be more hyped than you other than Chris himself."

I couldn't help but laugh at her logic. I didn't come here to sit on my phone all night so of course I was going to enjoy myself. I just needed a little breather.

The guys on the other hand were definitely enjoying themselves. I swear they were almost as loud as the music. It was good seeing them like this though. It's always nice seeing them having fun.

After a while of downing drinks and sitting pretty, the girls and I hit the dance floor to really get the night started.

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