Naamkaran โœ”๏ธ

By Aditi_creation

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Heyy Guys I'm new here.. I love the whole Naamkaran show but I didn't like the ending.. So I am writing what... More

Introduction
5 years Later
Neil meets KK
Avneil miss each other
Neav learns about Neil
Neil in Kashid
Neil meets Neav
AvNeil cross the path
Avni sees Neil
AvNeil's special moments
Neil again visit Sukoon Ghar
Happy Moments
Saisha makes everyone proud
Saisha and KK missing
AvNeil finally meet
Neil's anger
Avni's identity is out
Talks
Neil learns about Neav
Neil's drastic step
Neil files a case
AvNeil in court
Avni and Neav
Avni get humiliated
Fear
Praksh stand for Avni
Avni's Decision
Vidyut is death
Truth
Neil learns the truth
Avni's condition
Neil apologize to Avni
New Journey
Condition
AvNeil's Marriage
Marvelous day
Family Reunion
Bonding
AvNeil in Goa
Happiness
Happy Ending
~ NOTE ~

Vidyut at Khanna House

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Next Morning

As Avni told Tara Sitara took Neav to Ayesha maa house and at home they said that Neav is going to school...

All were sitting in garden.. Sunheri came their..

Bebe - Aree Sunheri Avni kaha hai.. usse bol nasta kar le.. kal se kuch nahi khaya usse..

Praksh - Haan sab yahi hai.. Mai,bebe,Neil, Swetha, Mitali.. or Neav kyu itni jaldi school chala gaya.. abhi to bas 9:00 baje hai.. lekin vo to kabse school ke liye nikal gaya hai..

Sunheri - Bebe vo Avni ready ho rahi hai.. or Neav ko school ke liye kuch lena tha isilye Tara Sitara ke saath jaldi nikal gaya..

In room a girl was getting ready.. wearing orange colour kurti type.. she apply kajal , she wear the nose pin, set her hair and get ready..

Here in garden Sunheri was talking with everyone and suddenly a car came..

Bebe - Yeh itni subhe subhe kon aaya..

Person shoes is shoes.. slowing his face is shown.. He is wearing black suit.. All get shocked seeing him..

Neil - Vidyut...

Suddenly DD came..

DD - Haan sir Vidyut ko jis zulm mai giraftaar kiya tha.. vo to abh..

Vidyut - Hello ACP.. oh sorry ex ACP.. keso ho Neil Khanna...

Neil - Vidyut... Tu yaha kya kar raha.. dekh sidhe sidhe nikal jaa yaha se..

Vidyut - (laugh) Shaant Neil Khanna shaant mai yaha sirf meri Avni ko lene aaya hu..

This boils Neil's blood..

Neil - Vo teri Avni nahi hai.. samja na.. nahi hai vo teri..

Vidyut - Hahha.. acha.. lekin maine suna hai tera Avni se divorce ho gaya or tu yeh officer Mitali se shaadi kar raha hai... Common Neil.. abh Avni teri koi nahi lagti.. to tu khush re iss Mitali ke saath muje meri Avni sop de..

Neil was going to speak suddenly a voice came from back...

Voice - Jo kar raha hai soch samajkar kar Vidyut.. jitna badha gunha utni badi saja..

And it was none other than our Avni.. but in different role..


(Photo belongs to their respective owners.. taken from Instagram)

All was shocked to see Avni in this look..

Neil - yeh Avni nahi Ananya hai..

Flashback

Person - Avni...

Avni - Tum

Small Avni - Shree Krishna bhagwan ne kabhi rann choda to kabhi saamne se vaar kiya..

Avni - matalb

Small Avni - Matalb ki ek baar tum rann chod ki bhumika nibha chuki ho abh saamne se vaar karni ki baari hai..
Ananya bano or Vidyut ka chapter khatam kardo..

Avni - nahi.. maine Neela maa or Neil se vaada kiya hai ki mai kabhi kanoon apne hath mai nahi lugi..

Small Avni - To koi raasta hai.. kal Vidyut aake saari sachay bata dega.. tab.. at least papa ke baare socho.. itna hone ke baad bhi unhone tume kuch nahi kaha.. vo tut jaayege sach pata chala to..

Avni think and says..

Avni - Thik hai.. Yahi sahi hoga.. Vidyut.. tyaar rehna.. Ananya Verma aa rahi hai..

Flashback ends...

Vidyut - Avni... Maan gaya tuje.. kya khel khela tune.. lekin ek baat kahu.. 5 saal mai tumari andar ki yeh aag aaj bhi vahi hai.. which drives me crazy..

All were feeling disgust by his talk.. but Neil was loosing his temper..

Vidyut - Bahut galat kiya tumne 5 saal iss tarah dokha de kar.. lekin Chalo abh tum mera junoon ho tumhe mai saja to de nahi sakta.. lekin ek mauka or deta hu..

Avni frown..

Vidyut - Tumare paas aaj bhi 2 raaste hai.. yaa to mujse shaadi kar lo ya phir apne iss parivaar ki barbadi dekho..

All was soo shocked to here Vidyut.. Neil notice that Vidyut was playing with a chain in his neck.. in that chain the pendrive was there..

Avni - Bahut kuch yaad hai tuje 5 saal phele ka.. to yeh bhi yaad hoga ki.. ek baar ek aurat ne tujse kaha tha.. Iss adhure khel ki adhuri baazi ko vo pura karne vo aayegi jarur.. or uss din tera saamna, tere zindagi ke sabse khatarnak dushman Ananya Verma se hoga.. 

The fire of anger and revenge was clearly seen in her eyes..

Vidyut - pata hai Avni hum dono ko khatro se khelne mai bada maja aata hai... Or usme bhi tumare saath khel khelne mai bada maja aayega..

Avni - Khete hai itihaas hamesa apne aap ko dohorata hai.. kuch saalo phele mere bhai Aman ne Dayawanti jesi buray ka anat kiya tha.. or aaj mai.. Ananya Verma darti ko tere boj se aazad hi kar dugi..

She takes out the gun from her back and point towards him..

All shocked..

Neil - Avni.. hoss mai aavo ye kya kar rahi ho..

Avni - Nahi Neil.. abh bahut ho gaya.. abh mai apno ko or dard nhi de sakti.. isiliye acha yahi hoga ki aaj Vidyut hi khatam ho jaaye...

Mitali - Avni.. tumhe yeh gun kaha se mili.. yeh to meri hai.. dekho vapas do muje..

Mitali was going to move towards Avni..

Avni - Nahi vahi rehna.. Do tin charges or laga dena.. issi maar ke mai khud hi surrender kar dugi.. vaise bhi abh yaha jeene ka koi matalb hi nahi bacha..

The last line broke Neil's heart..

Vidyut starts laughing..

Vidyut - Ohh Avni.. suna hai tera or Neil ka ek beta bhi hai.. Neav.. XYZ school mai padhta hai..mere aadmi vahi hai.. tera ek galat kadam or vaha Neav..

Neil - Vidyut..  agar mere bete ko ek kharoch bhi aayi to mai tuje chodaga nahi..

Vidyut - aree Neil Khanna vahi purani damkiya.. Kya kar lega tu.. kuch nhi kar paayega...

Avni - Vidyut nahi.. neav ko kuch mat karna please.. tum jo bologe vo mai karugi.. lekin Neav ko kuch mat karna..

Vidyut smirk..

And Avni started laughing.. All were confused..

Avni - Tuje kya laga Vidyut mai esa kahugi.. huhh.. kya kaha tere aadmi vahi hai.. chal phone laga unhe or puch.. neav mila vaha..

As per Avni says Vidyut calls his men and ask and they says.. Today Neav is absent today..

Vidyut shocked Avni smirk

Avni - Vidyut tuje kya laga.. tu aaj jail se release ho raha yeh jaan ne ke baad bhi mai Neav ko school bhejugi.. itni aasan chal Ananya nahi chalti..

Vidyut was still shocked.. even whole family was shocked.. where Neav is..

Avni - Vidyut Avni tuje barabar ki takkar de sakti hai.. lekin Ananya Verma tujse hamesa do kadam aage chalti hai.. Tu zameen aasman ek kar le.. tu Neav kabhi dundh nahi paayega.. Vo tuje tab tak nahi milega jab tak mai usse bahar aane na kahu..

She again point gun towards him..

Avni - chal Vidyut tera chapter abh khatam..

Vidyut -  Nahi Avni.. tum muje nahi maar sakti..

Avni - Sahi kaha tune Vidyut.. Avni tuje to kya kisi ko nahi maar sakti kyu ki uske liye riste,naate, vaade, pyaar sab maayne rakhte hai.. lekin Ananya Verma.. uske liye na hi koi riste,naate maayne rakhte hai..na hi pyaar or vaade.. uske liye sirf apna badla maayne rakhta hai..

Avni - Avni system, law, police uss sabh ko maanti hai.. Lekin Ananya.. nahi.. vo apna system apne rules khud hi banati hai.. Aaj tu apne har ek paapo ki kimat chukayega..

Avni eyes were filled with anger and Neil was shocked to see her like this.. Neil was saying not to do that but she was not listening to him..

Avni - Aaj tere har gunha ka hisaab hoga.. kayi ladki ko rangmahal mai rakhkar unki zindagi barbaad kar di, Juhi ko humare khilaaf ladaya, mera pura bachapn dohoraya, Juhi ke juthe murder case mai fasaya, Neil ko majbur kiya muje jail bhejne pr, Neil ko maarne ki koshish ki... Or sabse bada gunha.. meri Neela maa ko maara.. (the last crime she says from top of her lungs)

Vidyut - Nahi.. nahi.. tere baki sab sahi hai.. lekin teri Neela maa ko maine nahi maara.. yeh baat tu bhi jaanti hai or mai bhi..

Neil was hell shocked and confused..

Vidyut - Teri Neela maa ko kisine maara hai yeh bata du..

Before he can speak Avni fires a bullet and shot him on his leg (which is said to be shot for self defense )

Vidyut - ahhh...

Neil, bebe, Praksh, Sunheri, Swetha everyone was trying to stop her.. but no one can move from their place as she nodded no.. She was now became that fire which will cool down bu Vidyut's death..

Vidyut - Agar tu meri nahi to tu iss Neil ki bhi nahi hogi..

Avni - Muje kisi ka hona bhi nahi Vidyut..

This sentence of Avni makes Neil's eyes tears.. Tears roll down from his eyes.. Because now Avni don't want to come back in his life... Neil was having tears in his eyes..

Meanwhile Vidyut took out his gun and points towards Neil..

Vidyut -  Good bye Neil Khanna...

Avni - Neeiilllll......













How was today's part..

I hope uh all liked.. the Fire ball Ananya Verma returning..

Please show some more love and support to especially this part.. this is my favorite part.. as Avni fight as a fighter in this..

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