Avni's condition

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Neil reaches hospital..

Neil - Papa Avni..

Praksh was going to speak meanwhile doctor came..

Neil - Doctor Avni.. vo thik...haina..

Doctor - Dekhiye.. humne goli nikal di hai.. unka plus point hai ki unka heart right hai or goli left mai lagi thi.. varna patient ka bacha namukin tha..

Neil - Lekin abh to vo thik haina..

Doctor - Vaise to sab thik hai lekin..

Neil - Lekin.. lekin kya..

Doctor - Aap aaiye mere saath.. mere cabin mai..

They all just nodded and reach doctor's cabin..

Doctor - Dekhiye bullet hamne nikal di hai.. lekin unki body bahut weak ho chuki hai.. esa lagta hai kayi dino se unhone bahut stress bhi liya hai or ache se kuch khaya bhi nahi.. iski vagah se medicine unn par kaam nahi kar rahi..

Neil - Kyaaa.. (He remember that she has not eaten a single bite from yesterday )

Doctor - Haan.. isiliye iss weakness mai new injury recover karna muskil hai..

Praksh - iska koi toh solution hoga na..

Doctor - Haan.. aap inhe jitna ho sakte khush rakhe, ye baat kya dhyan rakhe ki ye stress na le, kuch bhi kaam na kare, or apne meals and medicine time to time le.. Please otherwise it is dangerous to her health.. Ek or baat.. agar unhe 24 hrs mai hosh nahi aaya to we are sorry..

Neil - Avni..

All were shocked.. a long tears escape from Neil's eyes..

Doctor - Sorry lekin hum kuch nahi kar sakte..

By saying this doctor left... Neil loses his balance and was about to fall but Praksh and Swetha holds him..

Praksh - Neil sambhal kar.. kya kar raha hai..

Neil - yeh.. yeh sab meri galati hai.. yeh sab meri vagah se huva hai.. Aaj Avni ki jo halat hai uska zimmedaar sirf mai hu.. Maine Neela maa se vaada kiya tha ki mai Avni ko hamesha safe rakhuga.. mai vo vada nahi nibha paaya..

Bebe - Tillu.. kya bol raha.. kuch nahi hoga Avni ko.. or tu uske saamne ese baat karega to vo or pareshan hogi..

Neil - Nahi.. nahi.. avni ko sabse jyada takleef maine hi di hai.. mai chala jaavuga Avni se dur.. Avni ke liye.. Mere vagah se abh Avni ki aakho mai or aasu nahi aayege..

Praksh - Neil.. ye kya bol raha hai tu..

Neil - sach hi to khe raha hu.. Mai Avni ko deserve hi nahi karta..

Praksh - Neill.. Tu firse vahi galati kar raha hai..

All sees towards Praksh..

Praksh - Haan.. vahi galati.. khud ko Avni se dur karke.. agar tu uske liye maayne nahi rakhta to vo apni jaan khatre mai nahi daalti.. uski khushiya Tujme, Neav ,or hum mai hai.. jo sapna.. ek perfect family ka usse dekha hai.. vo hi tu uss se chinn lega.. tu Avni se dur nahi jaa raha.. tu apni galati yo se bhaag raha hai.. Tu sach se bhaag raha hai.. Agar tuje esa lagta hai ki abh tere liye Avni ke dil mai vo jagah nahi..to bana vo jagah.. jeet le uska bharosa.. vo pyaar, vo hakk de usse jo uska hai.. apni galati ko sudhar usse bhaag mat..

All were having tears..

Neil in mind - Papa.. aap Avni ko hum sabse jyada samaj te hai.. Agar aapko ye pata chala ki Neela maa ko aapne maara hai.. to aap tut jaayege.. ye bharosa, yeh jiss hakk se aap Avni ko hamesha support or protect karte ho vo sab bikhar jaayega.. nahi Mai jo raaz Avni ne 5 saalo se chupa kar rakha hai.. vo bahar nahi aana chahiye..

Neil came out his thought and Immediately hugs Praksh..

After Nurse says that they can meet Avni.. they all enter the room.. Avni was lying unconscious with pale face.. oxygen mass and many wire attached to her.. Her face were dull.. They goes towards her with teary eyes.. Bebe keep her hand on her head..

Swetha - Tillu tu yahi reh.. hum raat ka khana bhejte hai.. or Neav bhi akela hai.. thik hai..

Bebe - Swetha sahi khe rahi hai... Hum chalte hai.. vaise bhi yaha 1 logo se zyada permission nahi hai..

Neil nodded and they Left..

Neil goes towards Avni.. caressed her head.. lean down and kiss her forehead.. He sits on the table.. holds her hand.. and kiss her hands..

Neil - I am sorry Avni.. mai tumhe samaj nahi paaya.. lekin please meri galati ki itni badi saza mat do.. please aakhe kholo.. (The words of Praksh were coming in front of him.. LEKIN EK BAAT SUNN LE KAHI TERE ISSI GUSSE OR NAFRAT KI VAGAH SE TU AVNI KO VAPAS NA KHO DE )

The fear of losing her again was coming in his mind..

It was a night time 9:30pm still Avni was unconscious.. Neil was hell scared.. And Praksh,bebe and Swetha came..

Swetha - Tillu..

Neil - Mom.. Avni.. Papa Bebe aap kahiye na usse ki vo apni aakhe khole.. mai jaanta hu vo mujse or mom se naraj hai.. lekin papa vo aapki baat hamesa maanti hai.. aap kahiye na.. please (he started crying)

Swetha eyes was also teary..

Bebe goes towards Neil and Neil hugs her..

Bebe - Shant ho jaa Tillu.. sab thik ho jaayega.. she broke the hug.. and wipes his tears.. Chal abhi rona bandh kar.. yeh le khana kha le..

Neil - Nahi.. abh to mai tab hi khana khavuga jab Avni muje apne haatho muje khilayegi..

All were having tears.. 

Bebe - Sab thik ho jaayega Tillu.. fikar mat kar.. chal abh hum chalte hai..

All left..Neil again looks to Avni.. He hold her hand..

Neil - Avni abh itni bhi narajgi.. dekho mere liye na sahi Neav ke liye apni aakhe kholo.. Tum jo saza dogi mai uske liye tyaar hu.. lekin please aakhe kholo Avni.. muje itni badi saza mat do.. 🥺

It was morning 5:00 am still Avni was unconscious.. Neil slept by holding her hand only.. Her eyes slightly stir... Slowing she open her eyes and see upwards and realise that she is in hospital.. She feel something in her hand and sees..Neil is sleeping in uncomfortable position by holding her hand.. She was still weak but she spoke slowly..

Avni - Neil..

Her voice was low but still audible to Neil.. Neil immediately woke up and see Avni get conscious... Neil Immediately stand up and hug her.. and let the tear come out and kiss her forehead.. Avni also feel peace with his touch for which she was craving.. she closes her eyes..





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