My Abhi Promise

By Jenisundar

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She is a simple girl with huge happiness of being herself...ever since she realised that she is in love with... More

Character intro
Friends forever..
Angel..
Pragya's indifference
Number 📞
Abhi and Sanjana
Naa mein sahi... naa Tu galath
The race...
Ranbir's birthday
New trouble
Is money everything?
Baba...
Come back soon..
so far yet close to heart...
Things changed a lot
I need you here..
Stepping inside a lion's den
Game is mine..
Who spared whom ?
PTSD
Long distance relationship..
Search for pragya
That Shocking moment..
Dark room
she is being strong for both
Being a woman is not easy..
New guests..
Pragya's decision
Marriage
Every wait has a worth..
So this is love...
Relationship status..
U r my north star..
Couple's quarrel..
you are my treasure.
Husband and wife...
You got me..... I got us...
Break from tradition..
without maa...
Lost peace
she
Sunset

Bulbul's baby shower..

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Days rolled but there is no improvement in pragya's eye sight but she didn't feel for that...she is happy with the way her life goes on..She is happy in seeing the world through abhi's eyes...

Sarala's house is decorated for bulbul's baby shower.. house is filled with guests and relatives..at that time ranbir goes near Sarala and says," Sarala maa...that's it... hereafter I can't bear your daughter's torture.. please you keep her in your house itself.."

Neighbor aunties eagerly turned towards ranbir...

One aunty: so Sarala... like Latha Didi you too started to get complaints about your daughter from her sasural..

Sa: I get nearly two complaints daily..

Then she turns to ranbir and asks

Sa: what did she do today..

Ra: she gave full cup coffee for everyone but only half cup for me..

Bulbul chuckles seeing other's faces..

One aunty asked," what is this Sarala..."

Sa: I too get complaints like you all but those complaints are not about my upbringing or my daughter's behaviour ...

All shut their mouths hearing that..

Bu: Haan aunty... problems in pragya's family is very different from ours.. even yesterday abhi and pragya had a fight because abhi unknowingly spilled water in pragya's mobile.. their family fights are very wierd and silly..

Ra: Bhabhi don't insult our family...

All chuckles..then sarala calls pragya..

Sa: pragya... pragya beta

Pragya comes there holding abhi's hand..

Sa: what is he saying pragya

Pr: maa..I was pouring coffee on everyone's mug, he was the last person so when I poured coffee got over...he is making a big deal over nothing..

Ra: did you see maa... how arrogantly she is replying

Pragya turns to abhi and asks," why are you quiet... tell everyone how he is torturing me"

Abhi looked like a goat which is going to get slaughtered..

One lady: in every house man will be strucked between his mother and wife but here abhi is strucked between his brother and wife..

Ab: we will do onething... let's do ranbir's marriage soon...

Ba: that will be good... even yesterday I spoke about his marriage to Sarala ji..

Sa: we will do their marriage after bulbul's delivery..

Some Aunty: Sarala ji...be careful they say if both daughters are married in the same family then it will create many problems..

Ra: we will take care , you don't worry about that..

Prachi holds ranbir's hand to calm him..

Then that night, pragya shouts from kitchen," Anyone go and buy 1 kg white Dal and half kg rajma..."

Abhi and Ranbir stared at each other..

Abhi eyed ranbir to go but ranbir nods negatively and says," you go"

Then both glared at each other for nearly two minutes ..

Pragya shouts

Pr: do you both need food

Abhi hits ranbir's back and goes to buy ...

While buying, abhi thinks," Which is one kg.. rajma or white Dal"

Then he calls pragya and asks," fuggy which is half kg"

Pr: is this a big doubt abhi..if you buy more then nothing will happen..

Saying she cuts the call..

Abhi sighs and thinks," last time she shouted at me asking why did I buy more.."

Then he buys and goes home...

At midnight when abhigya are sleeping in their room, ranbir rushed inside and waked pragya," fatty....fatty"

Abhi and pragya wakes up startled..

Ab: ranbir

Pr: what happened ranbir

Ra: where is my mobile's charger

Abhi glares at him but he ignores that and says pragya

Ra: quick ...my phone is going to get switched off

Pr: did you check in Papa's room

Ra: yes

Pr: then I don't know..

Saying she covers the duvet over her..

He pulled it and asked

Ra: please fatty

Pr: arey how will I know...

Ab: you use any of our chargers.

Ra: Bhai mine is iPhone

Pragya tells abhi

Pr: that's why I said you not to buy and give him that much costly mobile...you sleep

Ra: fatty

Pr: check in the TV stand..if you didn't find there then don't disturb us..

Ranbir goes from there..

Then abhi locks the door..

Few days later, outside the operation theatre,

Pr: no abhi...I will die abhi...maa please tell him maa...

Bulbul's two months old son ihaan cries hearing his maasi's cries...

Ab: fuggy this is just a small surgery..

Pr: no abhi...do you remember we both together saw final destination movie right..

Ab: oh god fuggy...

Sa: pragya beta.. stop crying...be brave

Pr: please maa...I don't want to see...I am happy like this..

Ab: fuggy please

Then without any other option abhi lifts her and goes inside the OT ..

Pragya shouts," no abhi"

Then abhi drops her on the bed and comes out..

Then seeing her moving a doctor tells pragya," don't move or else something bad might happen.."

Pr: you should have said this to them...abhi...abhi...did you hear him..

Nurse: doctor...yesterday in one hospital a girl died because she didn't obey doctor's words right..

Hearing that pragya became silent...

Pr: I will not open my mouth but please don't kill me..

Do: I will try my level best..

Pragya gulps hearing that..

Pr: doctor give me anesthesia please

Do: this is painless surgery pragya..

Then after the operation, doctor comes outside and says," operation is successful...you can meet her few hours later"

Sa: why doctor

Do: she is sleeping ...she is tired of screaming continuously..

Ab: thank you doctor..

Do: I pity the doctor who is going to handle her delivery..

All smiles hearing that..they knew their pragya is a scary cat ...she fears and cries if she even gets a small cut..

Then after sometime abhi goes inside the room and sees pragya sleeping...


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To be continued.....

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