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Heyy Guys I'm new here.. I love the whole Naamkaran show but I didn't like the ending.. So I am writing what... Altro

Introduction
5 years Later
Neil meets KK
Avneil miss each other
Neav learns about Neil
Neil in Kashid
Neil meets Neav
AvNeil cross the path
AvNeil's special moments
Neil again visit Sukoon Ghar
Happy Moments
Saisha makes everyone proud
Saisha and KK missing
AvNeil finally meet
Neil's anger
Avni's identity is out
Talks
Neil learns about Neav
Neil's drastic step
Neil files a case
AvNeil in court
Avni and Neav
Avni get humiliated
Fear
Praksh stand for Avni
Avni's Decision
Vidyut at Khanna House
Vidyut is death
Truth
Neil learns the truth
Avni's condition
Neil apologize to Avni
New Journey
Condition
AvNeil's Marriage
Marvelous day
Family Reunion
Bonding
AvNeil in Goa
Happiness
Happy Ending
~ NOTE ~

Avni sees Neil

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All were ready for culture festival.. On other side Neil, KK, Mitali, DD were also ready..

Suddenly Avni's phone rings she attended the call..

Avni - Saisha Samarth tum log jaavo mai thodi der mai aati hu.. muje kuch kaam hai..

Samarth - Jaandidi...

Avni - Samarth mai aa jaavagu.. mai hamesa tum logo ke saath hu.. muje bas yeh Sukoon Ghar ke related kuch kaam hai isliye.. please..

Saisha - ok Jaandidi but aap jaldi aana..

Avni - Haan and or haa bikul mat darna.. give ur best okk..

Samarth and Saisha nodes..

Avni - Sunheri tum bhi jaavo mai aa jaavugi..

All agree and they all left..

KK was sitting as judge and Neil ,DD, Mitali was sitting as special guest..

Saisha and Samarth perform and Neil was thinking about Avni..

(Guys I am not mentioning their performance)

Now it was result time...

KK goes to the stage and took the mice for announcement.. Saisha was seeing him continuously...

Samarth - Saisha.. KK ko ghurna bandh karo 😂

Saisha looks here and there..

KK - So all the performance was amazing.. lekin ek performance jo mere dil ko chu gayi.. that is winner...
And vo team hai...

Sunheri, Tara,Sitara all were praying with fingers cross..

KK - team Sukoon Ghar.. The winner of culture festival...

All became damn happiee..

Samarth - Thank you.. Thank you so much.. but lekin ye thank jo sahi mai deserve karta hai vo hai.. humari Jaandidi.. She is the one because we are here.. agar Jaandidi nhi to hum bhi nhi..

Saisha - Yess thank you so much Jaandidi.. hamesa humare sath dene ke liye.. humare sapno ko pure karne mai hme help karne ke liye.. love you Jaandidi..

Neil in mind - Kon hai yeh Jaandidi.. kuch dino mai kayi baar iss Jaandidi ka naam sunn chuka hu.. or aaj yaha aayi kyu nhi.. iss Jaandidi se milna toh hai..

Suddenly Neav came there..

Neil - Heyy tiger.. tu yaha or congratulations teri team jit gayi.. 

Neav -  Thank you.. lekin ek thank you aapko bhi superman..

Neil - muje kis liye thank you ??

Neav - Jaandidi ki taraf se.. uss din aapne unko bachaya tha na.. isislye..

Neil - Achaa to aap muje unse milva voge..

Neav - kyuu..

Neil - muje bhi unke thank you kehna hai..

Neav - aapko kyu..

Neil - Itna sweet sa tiger dene ke liye..Agar vo nhi hoti to hum dono kese milte.. haina..   Abh hum best friends haina.. so aap itna kar sakte ho na..

Neav - Ok mai Jaandidi se kahuga..

Neil - Yeahh give me hi-fi..

They both laugh.. suddenly Samarth came their..

Samarth - Heyy super man..

Neil - heyy.. congratulations.. uh so perform so good..

Samarth - Thank you..

Neil - well where is that girl jisne tumare sath perform kiya..

Samarth shows direction to Neil with his finger..

Samarth - See she talking with KK.. This girl.. seriously she is a crazy fan..

Suddenly KK came there..

KK - Heyy bro what do uh think.. I am thinking of giving a party tonight.. what's say..  Saisha.. uh will also be coming.. okk..

Saisha - Suree.. if uh invite how can I deny.. (blushing)

Neil - Ok guys so see uh all ar night.. bbye tiger..

Neav - bye Superman..

(Culture festival was binned up by 6pm and Party was at night 8pm)

Sukoon Ghar

Avni - Tum log aa gaye.. so sorry Samarth mai nhi aa paayi.. lekin mere paas tum logo ke ek good news hai.. phele Batavo kesa raha performance..

Samarth - Jaandidi mai aapse baat nhi kar raha hu..

Avni - Samarth sorry na..

Neav - no worry mumma.. mai aapke naraj nhi hu.. (making cute puppy face)

All giggles..

Samarth - Haan neav lekin mai to majak kar raha tha.. Jaandidi yeh dekho.. and he shows the winning trophy..

Avni - muje pata tha tum log hi jitoge.. proud of yoy.. (her eyes become teary with happiness)

Saisha - (Wipes her tear) nhi Jaandidi aapki vagah se hi hum yaha tak poche hai.. acha abh aap batavo kya surprise hai humare liye..

Avni - Hmm toh surprise yeh hai ki.. abh ye Sukoon Ghar ka rent hame nhi dena padega.. we brought this Sukoon Ghar.. abh hamesa ye humara ghar rahega..

Sunheri - kya.. kya.. Avni tu sach keh rahi hai..

Avni nodes.. all become very happy and hug her tightly...

Neha - aaj to sach mai bahut acha din hai.. so Happy..

Sitara -  Tum ne kar diya..

Tara - Haan aaj humari do baar jeet huyi hai..

Neav - yeah and he started running around all.. yeah. Hum jeet gaye.. woahhhh..

All smiles on his cuteness..

Avni - to abh to mera Sorry accepted na?

Saisha - Haan ek sharat par..

Avni - Kya ??

Saisha blush..

Avni - Abh KK ne kya kaha tumhe..

Saisha - Jaandidi aapko kese pata chala.. ki KK ke related baat hai..

Avni - abh itna blush karogi to sabko pata chal hi jaayega..(hits her head lightly)

All giggles..

Saisha - Haan Jaandidi usne aaj ek party organise ki hai.. hame chalte hai na vaha..  please 🥺

Avni - thik hai tum log jaa sakte ho.. but zyada late mat karna..

Samarth - na.. aap bhi chalegi humare sath..

Avni - Mai I.. nhi nhi mai kahi nhi aa rahi..

Neha - Common Jaandidi.. please..

Neav - Please Mumma...

Avni - Okk mai aavugi bas.. chalo abh ready nhi hona..

At night everyone was there in the party.. all were dancing and roaming..

Here KK comes to Saisha...

KK - Will you dance with me..

Saisha - what.. OMG.. am I am dreaming .. no no.. I mean yess I will dance... And she goes with him..

Avni - yeh ladki bhi na.. 🤦

Samarth - hum bhi thoda ghum ke aaye..

Samarth , Neav , Neha left...

Sunheri also left..

Sunheri goes to food counter and she said excuse me..

And a man turns.. Sunheri shocked..

Man - hey Sunheri tum yaha Kashid mai.. wow..

Sunheri - Neill.. tum yaha.. (shocked)

Neil - haa tum muje dekh kar itna shock kyu ho..

Sunheri - Nhi bas kitne saalo baad tumse mil rahi hu.. (muje ye nhi puchna chaiye lekin puchna hoga)
Or Neil muje pata chala Avni ke baare mai..

Neil become sad and his eyes become teary...

Sunheri - Neil.. tum udaas mat hovo.. Avni ko bhi acha nhi lagega..

Neil nodded..

Avni - Tara Sitara tum bhi ghumo mai Sunheri ko bula kar aayi..

When she was going Sunheri was talking with someone when she goes more close to her.. She saw Neil.. and get shocked..

Avni - Neil yaha.. Kashid mai.. yaani ki muje Neil ke aas paas hone ki feeling aa rahi thi vo sach thi.. lekin Neil yaha kya kar raha hai.. nhi phele muje yaha se jaana hoga.. Neil muje nhi dekh sakta.. varna sab barbaad ho jaayega.. nhi mhi.. chal Avni yaha se nikal...



Kya milege Neil or Avni ???





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