Naamkaran ✔️

By Aditi_creation

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Heyy Guys I'm new here.. I love the whole Naamkaran show but I didn't like the ending.. So I am writing what... More

Introduction
5 years Later
Neil meets KK
Avneil miss each other
Neav learns about Neil
Neil in Kashid
AvNeil cross the path
Avni sees Neil
AvNeil's special moments
Neil again visit Sukoon Ghar
Happy Moments
Saisha makes everyone proud
Saisha and KK missing
AvNeil finally meet
Neil's anger
Avni's identity is out
Talks
Neil learns about Neav
Neil's drastic step
Neil files a case
AvNeil in court
Avni and Neav
Avni get humiliated
Fear
Praksh stand for Avni
Avni's Decision
Vidyut at Khanna House
Vidyut is death
Truth
Neil learns the truth
Avni's condition
Neil apologize to Avni
New Journey
Condition
AvNeil's Marriage
Marvelous day
Family Reunion
Bonding
AvNeil in Goa
Happiness
Happy Ending
~ NOTE ~

Neil meets Neav

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Here KK and Mitali moves towards hotel and DD and Neil moves another side...

On other side..

Avni - Saisha.. Saisha.. yeh ladki bhi na.. kaha gayi yeh.. Saisha..

Samarth - Jaandidi vo ghar pr nhi hai..

Avni - ghar pr nhi hai.. kaha gayi vo..

Samarth - Vo kal ke shopping ke liye gayi hai..

Avni - Yeh bhi na.. Kal performance mai sirf acha dikhna hi nhi acha perform bhi karna.. kab karoge practice tum log..

Neav giggles...

Avni - Neav tum kab aaye..

Samarth - Jaandidi.. aap tension mat lo.. hum practice kar lege.. and ha mai Neav ko lekar park jaa raha hu.. And don't worry mai uska dhyan rakhuga..

Neav - Haan Jaandidi mai apna dhyan rakhuga.. (giggles)

Avni frown..

Samarth - Neav... Mumma se Jaandidi... 😒

Neav - Samarth bhaiya.. lekin Jaandidi meri mumma hai vo sirf humko pata hai.. sabko nahi.. Top secret hai 🤫

Samarth and Avni laugh at his cuteness...

Avni - Chalo abh tum log jaavo.. jyada late mat karna ghar aane mai.. or apna dhyan rakhna..

Both Neav and Samarth nodes their head..

Neav were playing in park.. After 1 hour he get tired..

Neav - Samarth bhaiya bahut bhuk lagi hai..

Samarth - achaa aapko bhuk lagi.. acha batavo kya khavoge..

Neav - Kuch bhi..

Samarth - Ice cream khane chale?..

Neav - Haan.. chaliye..

Neav and Samarth moves to have ice cream.. and at the same shop Neil and  DD were standing..

While Neav and Samarth was going.. Samarth sees a old lady was trying to cross the road..

Samarth - Neav tum shop tak jaavo.. mai unki help karke aaya.. or ha vahi khade rehna.. kahi jaana mat okk..

Neav - Ok bhai..

Neav goes towards shop.. he wants ice cream but his height was soo small and a man was standing in front of him..

Neav -  Aap thoda side hatiye na please.. (by pulling that man hand)

The man turns and it's none other than Neav..

Both sees each other..

Neil - Aap ne hame kaha..

Neav - Haan hame ice cream khani hai.. lekin mai aapse bahut chota hu.. to mai ice cream vaale uncle ko nhi dikhuga..

Neil and DD smiles at his cuteness...

Neil pick Neav in his arm and make him sit on the table..

Neil - bade bhari ho aap toh..

Neav giggles..

Neil - Batavo konsi ice cream khavoge..

Neav - Aap khilavoge ??

Neil - Haan kyu..

Neav - Samarth bhaiya ne kaha tha.. mai unka wait karu..

Neil - Samarth bhaiya.. kaha hai vo..

Neav show his hand towards the road where Samarth is helping that lady..

Neil - Koi nhi vo aa jaayege.. vaise  aapka naam kya hai... aap to bade cute ho..

Neav sees DD and ask..

Neav - aap bhi inke saath ho..

DD nods yes..

DD - Haan.. Humara naam DD hai..

Neav - DD (he spoke in the same tone how Avni use to speak)

DD in mind - Isne to bilkul usi tone mai muje bulaya jese Avni bhabhi muje bulati thi..

Neil - aapka naam kya hai beta..

Neav - mai kyu batavu.. Jaandidi khete hai.. stranger ko apna naam nhi bataneka..

Neil flashback...

Avni and Neil 1st meeting..

Neil - Naam kya hai tumara..

Avni - Mai kyu batavu.. mai ajnebiyo ko apna naam nhi batati..

Neil flashback end..

Suddenly shopkeeper come..

SK - Are tum yaha.. tumari bhi jaanleva didi nhi aayi.. 😅

Neav - making angry face.. unka naam Jaandidi hai..

Neil - Jaanleva didi?...

SK - nahi nahi unka naam to Jaandidi hai.. bas mai unhe Jaanleva didi bulata hu..

A voice came from back..

Unka naam Jaandidi hai..

It was none other than Samarth..

Samarth - agar ek baar aapne unhe kuch or kaha to fir hume mat khena..

Neav giggles.. Neil and DD frown..

Neil - Heyy tum has kyu rahe ho (in low voice)

Neav - abh ye uncle to dekhna.. kese Samarth bhaiya se sorry bolege.. 😂

Neil was confused..

SK - Bulavu to kya kar loge..

Samarth - jyada kuch nahi bad Leela Aunty to jaake bata dege ki uss din aap uss aunty se kya baat kar rahe the..

Shopkeeper shocked..

SK - Haa jaavo mai to bas kaam hi  baat kar raha tha..

Samarth - Haan aap baat kar rahe the ya flirt.. vo to aunty hi decide karge.. fir ghar ke bahar sona.. hame kya..

Neav laughs..

SK - aree Samarth beta.. tum to bura maan gaye...mai to majak kar raha tha.. tu bhi na.. bolo konsi ice cream du..

And gave one ice cream to Samarth and other to Neav..

Samarth raise his eyebrows.. 🤨

Shopkeeper smiles..

SK - Beta mai kabhi kuch nhi boluga.. or aage se esa nhi karuga.. tumari aunty ko kuch mat batana please...

Samarth nodes postively..

Samarth - Ok.. yeh lijiye.. ice ke paise..

SK - nhi kha lo.. bas kuch bolna mat..

Samarth - Nahi nahi.. humari Jaandidi ne hme kisi ka fayda uthana nhi sikhaya.. hum Leela aunty ko kuch nhi batayege..

SK nods and left for some work..

Samarth - aap log yaha naye hai..?

Neil - Haan hum Mumbai se hai.. bas yaha culture festival ke liye aaye hai..

Samarth - wow.. hum bhi culture festival mai perform karne vaale hai..

Neil - ohh wow.. vaise ek baat puchu.. yeh Jaandidi.. I mean kuch samaj nhi aaya..

Samarth - Jaandidi.. vo unka real name nahi hai.. vo to hum sab unko pyaar se bulate hai.. or vo orphanage chalate hai.. hum vahi rehte hai..
Acha hum chalte hai.. aapse milkar acha laga..

Neil nods..

Samarth - (ask neav ) chale..

Neav - haan chaliye..

Both  says bye to Neil and DD and leaves from there..

DD - Sir.. inko dekh kar.. inki baate sunn kar.. Bhabhi ki yaad aa gayi..

Neil - Sahi kaha DD..

Both sees each other and smiles..

There Neav and Samarth reached Sukoon Ghar..

Avni - Samarth kaha reh gaye the tum dono..

Samarth explain how he helped that lady..

Neav - Mumma aaj hum do uncle se mile.. bahut maja aaya.. unn mai se ek uncle na name bahut funny tha..

Avni - acha kya naam tha unka...

Neav was going to speak but suddenly Saisha come shouting..

Saisha - Jaandidi Jaandidi..

Avni - Kya huva Saisha..

Saisha - Jaandidi aapko pata hai.. KK the superstar KK has already came.. OMG.. KK Kashid mai hai..

All palm their head 🤦

They all moves towards their respective rooms..

Neav was going to speak DD but can't.
Let's see what destiny has planned...

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