THE RISING STAR AWARDS ✔

💫ROMANCE RESULTS 💫

5.Unexpected change with a promise by Shaunatay

Title: 3/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 8/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar: 7/10
Vocab: 5/10
Writing Style: 8.5/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Attraction: 10/10

Total: 80.5/100

Feedback: The blurb is confusing, you manage to get an insight, but it should be improved to make it easier for the readers. The story is really interesting, I'm liking it really! With the grammar and vocabulary improved, this can be such a great story. Although I really wanted some back story of Austin playing around (being a baddie) and Zay's heartbreak, it could help the audience connect more.

6.Fathomless Love of Kabir and Pooja by ThisisIRENE

Title: 2/5
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 2/10
Characters: 5/10
Grammar: 3/10
Vocab: 3/10
Writing Style: 4/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/10
Attraction: 4/10

Total: 41/100

Feedback: This story needs to be worked upon a lot, like really a lot. DUe to the poor grammar and writing, the story or the plot is not highlighted here. It is very difficult to read. I'm not being harsh, but I'm just telling the truth.

7. The penchant by FizaKhan3

Title: The penchant. (3)
Cover: Beautiful. 3.5
Blurb: (6.5)
Plot: (6.5)
Originality: 7
Characters: 9
Grammar/punctuation: 6
Vocabulary: 7
Writing style: 6
Overall enjoyment: 8
Attractive power: 9

Total: 71.5/100

Review: The blurb of the story is really short and needs a lot of editing. Try making the blurb more interesting so that it does its job- attract readers. The cover of the book is beautiful and suits the story well. You need to work on your grammar and spellings. Great job!

8. Facade of perfection by Shrya1712

Title: Facade of perfection (4)
Cover: 4
Blurb: 7
Plot: 8
Originality: 8
Characters: 7
Grammar/punctuation: 8.5
Vocabulary: 7
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 8
Attractive power: 7.5

Total: 73/100

Review: The blurb is beautiful. The title and the cover is up to the mark. The characters are pretty sorted and I like it. The way you write is simple and proper. You can make the plot more interesting and unique. Try making the talks (dialogues) more interesting.

9. Drowning by Eveleft13

Title: Drowning (3.5)
Cover: 2
Blurb: 7
Plot: 8
Originality: 7
Characters: 6

Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocabulary/spelling: 6
Writing style: 8
Overall enjoyment: 7
Attractive power: 9

Total: 68/100

Review: The blurb and the title are great. The cover could've been better. There are small errors which are needed to be edited carefully. Storyline is gripping. A good read!

10. If I were you by MeganVinotucino

Title: 5

Cover: 9
Blurb:9
Plot:8
Originality: 9
Characters: 6
Grammar/punctuation: 8
Vocabulary/spelling: 7.5
Writing style: 9
Overall enjoyment: 10
Attractive power: 7

Total: 87.5/100

Review: Beautifully written. Delivered amazingly. Simple and snappy start, very attractive. I adore the reverse roles. I love it, good job!

11. Beyond Words - Jacob Diaries by littleasian1998

Title: 3
Cover: 3.5
Blurb: 7
Plot: 7
Originality: 6
Character: 6
Grammar/punctuation: 6
Vocabulary/spelling:6
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 6
Attractive power: 7

Total: 64.5/100

Review: The title is really long- think of a short one. There aren't a lot of errors but you need to edit your book carefully. Character development is important. Well done!

12. Jaded heart by 17Mysery

Title: 3
Cover:2
Blurb: 6
Plot: 6
Originality: 6

Characters: 8
Grammar/punctuation: 7
Vocab/spelling- 6
Writing style: 7
Overall enjoyment: 6.5
Attractive power: 5.5

Total: 63/100

Review: Improve your writing style. Could've been delivered well. The title sounds interesting but the cover is something you need to work on. Try @feralshadow's graphic shop- the kind of graphics she makes is perfect for your books. Simple and easy to read. Good job!

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