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Judges - LegendCaster and mrjayjay168
1. ArielNoel18 - Sin Lust A Vampire - 3RD PLACE
Title - 15 - 12
Book Cover - 7 - 7
Blurb/Description - 9 - 7
Characters - 25 - 24
Originality/Creativity - 9 - 9
Writing Style - 29 - 28
Total Score - 94% - 87%
OVERALL SCORE = 90.5%
FEEDBACK;
I can see you have a potential. Great work. I am speechless, tho I have noticed minimal errors but I believe you can work with that because you’re almost there. Sin Lust A Vampire is a masterpiece. Continue writing and never give up on your dreams.
FEEDBACK;
First things first! In title, I gave you 12 percent only. It's because for me, the simplicity of a certain title really matters. And as what I read in your story, from chaps 1-5, I think they are not interalated except to the fact that the genre of your story is vampire/werewolf. Also I noticed that your description and cover photo were a little bit confusing. it's somehow didn't successfully meets my interpretation on the image (cover photo) and didn't persuade me as a reader and judge to read ur story (description). On the good side, I love the plot of your story, the characters,your writing style (from chaps 1-5 only), the originality, etc. You used proper words also, you are a well-detailed writer, because u explained the features or looks of ur characters. Also the writing style u used was 1st person Pov, which is for me one of the best writing style. All in all, it was a good job! Applause for you my dear❤️
2. Darwin2005 - Refuge - HONORABLE MENTION
Title - 15 - 13
Book Cover - 6 - 7
Blurb/Description - 10 - 6
Characters - 23 - 22
Originality/Creativity - 10 - 9
Writing Style - 30 - 28
Total Score - 94% - 85%
OVERALL SCORE = 89.5%
FEEDBACK;
I’m amused, really. I enjoyed the flow of the story and it gives perfect details. It is a short story yet satisfying.
FEEDBACK;
For me the title of your story was a little bit catchy, the readers will ponder if what's the story all about and I think it is one of the strength of ur literary composition. Also I loved the originality, writing style, etc. U put many idiomatic expressions in your story, figurative speech, etc. You uses different techniques in writing in order for you to catch the attentions of your readers. The plot was also good and somehow interesting. However, the cover and description of your Story were vague. I mean, it is slightly not anchors to the content of the story! U must learn the importance of visual rhetoric. The characters also are confusing, in my opinion, u must avoid many characters specially if ur story is incipient. As i read your story, it has an ups and downs. I loved the flow of the story but sometimes it is not consistent. There are flaws, etc. But don't u worry, WE, amateur writers do the same mistakes even though a professional one. I do believe that u can improve ur writing skills. Still, I can say that it was a good job! God bless and have a blast.
3. iluvY00ngi - The Man In My Dreams - 1ST PLACE
Title - 15 - 13
Book Cover - 10 - 8
Blurb/Description - 10 - 8
Characters - 24 - 22
Originality/Creativity - 10 - 7
Writing Style - 28 - 28
Total Score - 97% - 86%
OVERALL SCORE = 91.5%
FEEDBACK;
I find your story interesting. I’m looking forward for the continuation since you aren’t done yet. I have no other words at all. I completely enjoyed it. Looking forward for your update. Great job!
FEEDBACK;
The title, cover, and description really resembles to the theme of the story. U began with a strong start, i loved how u started ur story. The events was well stated and very detailed, i loved the flow of ur story but sometimes i feel bored reading it. All in all, t'was a good job.
4. cutiecane23 - The Auction - 2ND PLACE
Title - 15 - 14
Book Cover - 7 - 9
Blurb/Description - 8 - 8
Characters - 25 - 23
Originality/Creativity - 9 - 9
Writing Style - 27 - 28
Total Score - 91% - 91%
OVERALL SCORE = 91%
FEEDBACK;
You have a lot of errors. As a perfectionist as I am, you need to proofread your own work or let someone do it. I’ve noticed grammatical errors, wrong usage of pronouns and punctuation marks and also the capitalization of letters. You have to learn when and how to use these common things. I’m very practical when it comes to these. Overall, your work is fine. You just need to improve these things I’ve mentioned. Good job!
FEEDBACK;
This story really captivated my intention and heart, Actually I read all of the chapters of it. From the title,cover, description, character, I think all parts are excellent! This story brought me to another dimension.... Nothing wish for it. Godbless...
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