[i need a editor please, I'm 13 and not the best with spelling and grammer. please excuse any spelling mistakes. enjoy and vote and comment, id love any feed back!!]
The erasers had given up about 40 miles back, so I flew out from under the over hang and promptly flew into some thing large. "OOF!!" I tucked in my wings and turned over and landed painnfully on my back. Suddenly i was surrounded by six angery bird kids, with one stretched over my stomach,stunned by the crash.
I decided being rude woulndt help my position, so i asked as politely as i could, considering i was thinking about throwing this blond haired bird kid over the side of the ravine for flying into me.
" Could you please, GET OFF OF ME!!!!!" OK so I'm not very polite in the best of times, usually I'm just sarcastic or demanding when I talk to people.
A girl with brown hair that looked alot like me spoke up next. " What are you doing here? How did you get here?" I was glad that I had pulled in my wings, like i said, anyone can be a white coat. I stood up as soon as the kid on top of me rolled off of me. As soon as I looked up I regretted it. I stumbled backward and fainted.
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Flying free
Fanfictionyou all know the story of maximum ride, but what if she had a sister?
