Flying free

Flying free

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nessie By Angelus143 Updated Feb 04, 2011

you all know the story of maximum ride, but what if she had a sister?

Blackfireworks Blackfireworks Jan 04, 2012
This is really good. you should probably change where it says " what if she had s sister." Because she does. " you should change it to something like, "what if she had another sister other than Ella." But this is really good. keep going. I love Max ride.