Book name: WILD
Author: _llyiRa_
Marks:
TITLE:7/10
BLURB:6/10
COVER:8/10
PLOT:9/10
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:6/10
GRAMMAR:7/10
FLOW:7/10
DIALOGUE :5/10
CREATIVITY:9/10
OVERALL:7/10
TOTAL:71/100
BRIEF REVIEW:
Overall the book is interesting but it needs a lots of improvement. The book needs an extra chapter for its characters as it's really difficult to remember the characters. The concept of the story is different . But upto 14 chapters, The title is not justified and the dialogues should be clear. It sometimes creates confusion as who is speaking. From the point of view a reader, it somewhere appears boring . So try to make it simple and interesting .
Book: MONTEVERDE ACADEMY
Written by pretty_poison_
Marks:
TITLE:9/10
BLURB:8/10
COVER:7/10
PLOT:9/10
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:6/10
GRAMMER:8/10
FLOW:7/10
DIALOGUE:9/10
CREATIVITY:9/10
OVERALL:9/10
TOTAL:81/100
BRIEF REVIEW
From the point of view of a reader the story is very much interesting, Full of suspense, amazing.But it lacks description and character development. The characters should be described briefly in a separate chapter,so that the story will become more interesting. The cover of the story also requires a bit changes. Otherwise, the story is perfect.
Winner is MONTEVERDE ACADEMY
by pretty_poison_
There is only one winner as entries were only two.
Congrats👏👏👏👏👏
