2020 Rewrite and Revision plan;
Okay, it's currently November 2nd, 2020, before election day and i have officially decided to restart this story, so um, yeah? I think it's best if Scarlett's secrets or general more in detail backstory and such are revealed much later, originally i slapped them out in chapter one and god it was, a mess. Oh, and of course are unknown to the reader, i may actually publish this so ahh, i'm nervous, i should probably make more backstory for scar rather than JUST her typical sob backstory, it needs more reason other than just being thrown out.
Second, i need to be more lengthy but not so much in every detail it takes 4 minutes to describe a scene. Another thing, BE LOGICAL, no one would pull put a gun on an intruder without asking who's there first, could be a friggin cat, or mouse. I need to focus on detail and backstory but also to be more logical, I mean would you trust a random ass stranger who offered to let you stay for free? Probably not, SO i'm going to try and use chapter one to depict the reader and scarlett's life, along with providing a little backstory, and to have it make more sense, i'll admit this whole story overall was crazy rushed and moved too fast, i'm working on it XD i want to add more emotion to the story aswell, maybe have scarlett actually have friends that she just fell out with. I'm considering to give Scarlett a pet! Maybe a chihuahua like mine. I want to tone down the different languages and probably keep scarlett to only Norweigan, English, and Spanish, i'm definitely toning down the songs, this isn't my little pony, no one is gonna burst into song.
Though! Do not worry, this will be you and Edd mostly, popping in on Scarlett here and there if not equally. Though to any possible readers, forgive me if im not very frequent with updates! I am a mess 24/7, i have Schizophrenia, Depression, and ADHD, So yeah what a fun mix sjndnd, i personally ask that Scarlett is not mocked or copied in any way, shes a representation of me, the traumas she has are mine (some parts are soley for the story, youll understand eventually) so i hope that shows why id be uncomfortable with a copy of her around, it would basically be mocking me and my mental illnesses. if anyone stumbles onto this story, i'm so sorry, hello! You can call me Adri, i'm 17, and i'm a writer and artist, Scarlett is an actual character of mine whom i've had for 8, almost 9 years, i made her in 2011! So please do not attempt to copy or claim her :')i started this story in i'd say September 2018? So yeah, i've been spending way too long on this haha, This paragraph will stay as a placeholder until chapter one is fully remade and redone, till then, who knows?
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