Title: kalopsia
Author: -bvcky
One sentence summary: Fallon meets a troubled Harry in therapy and they learn to grow from each other.
To improve:
I'm a grammar freak, can't help it, and I don't know if it's a choice of style but the lack of upper-case letters is a bit distracting to me.
To preserve:
The characters are so good! Fallon is so easy to love, and despite that Harry is... complicated, you can't help but love him and root for him instantly.
My overall opinion:
At first I felt like the story is going too fast, but as I kept reading I actually liked the pace of it, I loved every interaction between Fallon and Harry and how they seem to be different when they're around each other– also I really liked the depth of the plot.
This story is for you if:
You don't mind diving into deep feelings, if you're into the 'darker' type of Harry, and if you can't say no to stories with gorgeous aesthetics.
Just a reminder that this is purely my opinion, I am in no way expert and this is completely subjective.
Be kind- Rose 🌹
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