-Judgment day-

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Hi! this is my first ever proper book ive ever tried to write on wattpad so if its not great thats why haha.i hope you enjoy it :)

Eves POV:My hands were sweating,all sorts of thoughts were running through my head.i shouldve never ate that apple.How could i be so stupid?! I just wanted to taste that sweet juicy  apple.I didnt know what the big deal was.I went against my God because of my own temptation.I had misjudged his authority.That crime alone deserves me to burn in the depths of hell forever.But why me.Why not Adam? Am i weaker? more fragile? it seems like it.I was too busy lost in my own thoughts to realise that the doors of heaven had opened.I was lead in by two angels (Or so i supposed)and it was time.Judgment day. When i looked down i experienced a moment of shock realising i was walking aimlessly on clouds, Then i remembered this was heaven afterall.

It was pretty much how i'd expected it.All white and grand; the physical representation of paradise.This would inevitably be the first and last time i can even set my foot here.I cant help but wonder what my punishment will be.Probably hell.But i need to cling on to any chance of hope that i wont be sent to that place.Ive never experienced it myself but if the snake that made me commit this horrible crime came from there, it must be horrible.I wondor what will happen to Adam? my supposed 'lover'.I will probably be replaced with another woman.It saddens how much uninterest i had shown to Adam.I just didnt feel any affection to him.

I just didnt feel any affection to him

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Again lost in my own day dream, i was startled into consciousness by a yank from one of the angels holding my hand.We were now standing in a big room which looked like a grand court room.Realisation came to me in a wave of fright.This was it.They were going  to decide my punishment right then and there.What i will spend the rest of eternity doing.To the left of me i heard a door opening and saw him.God,my creator.The tears running from my eyes stinged on my cheeks.He sat on the opposite side of the room.he looked at me and did something i didnt expect- smile.Was he taking pity on me? i hoped.

one of the angels beside God spoke 'today we will be decided the prosecution of Eve tate'

-tate.I didnt know i had a last name? I suppose that would be Adams last name too.

Then God spoke.His voice was loud and deep.But not intimidating in the way you would think.More of like an authority figure.'The sins she has commited have been going against the word of God and falling into the hands of Satan by temptation'.

Then he paused for a minute and consulted with the two angels next to them.One was a tall dark haired woman with skin as white as snow, She wore a white gown and had these gorgeous wings .She was beautiful.Breathtaking even.The other was a small pudgy guy with a white cane and slightly crooked angel wings, not so majestic.

Then he spoke again, 'It would be unjust for me to punish you for commiting one sin.We all have the chance to repent.You will be sent down to earth with numerous demons trying to tempt you.You must stay a true disciple to God and ignore these temptations.

- i was confused.Being sent down to earth would mean being sent down back to Adam with no other humans.How could there be more demons? However, i was beyond relieved and grateful that he had shown me mercy.I made a vow to myself never to sin again.

almost like he read my mind he said 'time is slower in heaven,when you will be sent back to earth it will be a completely foreign land and not like the garden of Eden at all.Your memories will be wiped and you will forget this conversation completely.'

I was shocked.my memories would be wiped? before i could say something in detest, everything went black.

hi!! i know this was a little bit short and i apologize for that.This is my first chapter and please let me know what you think of it :) i will probably update next week. i hope you are all staying safe in quarantine xxx also sorry about the spelling mistakes!!

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