part 9

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Ok so I want to write this story in second person not first person so I'm going to be using you instead of I

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You and ona made it back to the house ona ran and sat next to Alvaro when you just went upstairs to get your charger when you  got your charger your rang and it was Dixie

D: hey
Ana: are you ok
D: no
Ana: what's happened why you crying
D: I was walking home and saw mark
Ana: what

Background story
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You and mark used to be friends untill one day his dad switched sides your dad and marks dad were best friends they thought nothing would break there bond but then marks dad when to a gang that was going against your dads gang and then they started to fight and argue when you and mark found out mark change up aswell and he tryed to kill dixie and then they left and befor he went he posted a letter that said I'll be back to kill dixie

End of story

Ana: hey it's going to be fine
D: no its not
Ana: why
D: I'm home alone

You quicky put the phone down and ran downstairs

Ale: why you in a rush
Ana: sorry guys but I need to get going
Ona: when will you be back
Ana: maybe tomorrow
Ale: what's going on
Ana: call me later

You drove to your mum's house because that's where Dixie is when you got there the lights were of and there was no noise coming from any rooms

Ana: Dixie are you here
D: finally your here
Ana: why you in the dark
D: because if someone is here they won't see me
Ana: well I'm here
D: I'm scared
Ana: he won't do anything
D: he said he will kill me
Ana: yeh but no one is going to let that happen

You guys were taking and then your phone rang it was alejandro

Ale: hey mamas
Ana: hey
Ale: so are you going to tell me what's going on
Ana: oh so there's this boy who wants to kill my sister and she's scared to be on here own
Ale: where's your dad
Ana: he's gone on a business trip with my mum
Ale: so why doesn't she stay with us
Ana: would that be fine with you
Ale: yeh your fine with my friends always coming around
Ana: ok we will come in a bit
Ale: bye mamas
Ana: bye baby

D: what was that about
Ana: he said you can stay with us
D: aww he so nice
Ana: don't fall for him tho
D: why
Ana: because I said so
D: are you jelouse
Ana: no

You guys left the house and Dixie had all her thing when you got to the house there was a girl there that you've never seen befor

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