04. unexpectedly expecting by nagi!

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FIRST IMPRESSIONS!

title! (2/5)

-aaah omg please don't be offended because of the score that you got :> i personally think that this somehow clashes with your description. like it said there that they're expecting something in their lives (expecting the expected) but the title is 'unexpectedly expecting'?

-ohmygod i feel like i'm judging too fast oml please don't get me wrong, maybe this is because we're not too deep in the plot yet but this is how i honestly feel about your title.

-don't hesitate to explain this to me hehe i would be very much grateful if you did 'cause sometimes, i'm pretty dumb lmao

cover! (3/5)

-it looks cute and simple! just kinda bothered by how the title isn't in the center and how the cover doesn't relate to the story that much

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-it looks cute and simple! just kinda bothered by how the title isn't in the center and how the cover doesn't relate to the story that much.

description! (5.5/10)

5/10)

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