03. high fidelity by kay!

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-okay um, i just wanted to say that your writing style is absolutely fascinating and amazing?? how you describe things is honestly very addicting and satisfying!

-there's really nothing bad to say about your writing style! it was quite difficult to find any flaws because i think you proofread your book nicely.

-here's what i found: (i may be wrong in some of my corrections aaaah if i am, please lmk!)

-here's what i found: (i may be wrong in some of my corrections aaaah if i am, please lmk!)

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-i think you meant 'has' instead of 'as'.

-your sentence is perfectly fine and grammatically correct but i just thought that maybe substituting one 'back' with its appropriate synonym may sound better

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-your sentence is perfectly fine and grammatically correct but i just thought that maybe substituting one 'back' with its appropriate synonym may sound better.

-your sentence is perfectly fine and grammatically correct but i just thought that maybe substituting one 'back' with its appropriate synonym may sound better

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- :))

- :))

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