-okay um, i just wanted to say that your writing style is absolutely fascinating and amazing?? how you describe things is honestly very addicting and satisfying!
-there's really nothing bad to say about your writing style! it was quite difficult to find any flaws because i think you proofread your book nicely.
-here's what i found: (i may be wrong in some of my corrections aaaah if i am, please lmk!)
-i think you meant 'has' instead of 'as'.
-your sentence is perfectly fine and grammatically correct but i just thought that maybe substituting one 'back' with its appropriate synonym may sound better.
- :))
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