Fate/Last Time

Chapter 1

(I do not own anything except for my version of Shirou Emiya and the slightly altered plot.Also I will refer to time Archer as time )
Rin:"Come to me Guardian of the scales"

Time:"Servant Archer,by your request I have comed.Now I ask you are you my master."So I was summoned to the Grail war....Is that rin?

Rin:"Archer huh,well that's disappointing but I can probably work with this, although i will have to change my strategy"

Time: "Master,I am right here,well it doesn't matter hopefully you can support me"

Rin:"oh sorry,and what do you mean if I can support you?"

Time:"What I mean,is that this isn't an honorable duel between mages,this is a fight to the death that will probably scar you for the rest of your life.So I will rephrase my question will you still be master"there's no point in hiding what this is,what I said may very well be sugar coating of she found out what happened to her sister.

Rin:"Of course I will still be your Master.As the heir tohsakas I will still be your master.Now we should probably wait for my ally.Its 2:12 am and he said he would get here at 3 with his servant.

Time:"you've already made an alliance,you know we're going to have to eliminate them later".

Rin:"Don't worry I already thought about that he has no wish for the Grail and from what I've seen of his servant she doesn't either."

Time:"Who is this unsual master and servant pair,it's already strange that a master doesn't have a wish but a servant as well are you sure the're not tricking you."

Rin:"That's what I thought but those two redheads were adamant on it,but still what skills do you posses,your stats are mediocre but at least your Noble Phantasm is powerful."

Time:"Well ignoring your rude comments,I posseses independent action rank A, Magecraft B,and self modification D.

Rin:"Self modification,I don't see anything weird about you.Well we should probably get ready for our team mates.

Rin and Time spend an hour getting ready by discussing strategies then 30 minutes berating rin for having her clock an hour forward.Followed by another 30 minutes waiting.

*Ding dong*

Rin:"That must be then I'll open the door."*proceededs to open door*Hello Muramasa-kun.

Shirou:"Hello tohsaka"

(And that's chapter 1 was that too short?long?just right?Let me know and tell me what you guys think about the chapter I'll probably update this whenever I get bored but I'll try to finish it before March so im not juggling 3 stories also tell me if you know who Shirou summoned I already gave some hints.They are a girl,red headed and have no interest in the grail.also look forward to another version of Shirous)