(This has been edited once, for anyone who has already read it)
I'm writing this for the enjoyment for others and myself. This is NOT apart of the SCP universe, even though it does have the SCP's and the foundation in it. I created this idea from my 8th grade mind-this was about a year ago- and put it into a short story for a project in English 1, but now I've decided to expand on that idea and learn from my mistakes with it. This year in the second semester i'll have English II and i wanted to expand my knowledge of English and writing. The problem though is that i suck at writing and i need all my readers to help me to make me a better writer, so please comment on my work and critique me so i can get better but do not be rude about it.
Enjoy what you're about to read and critique what you need to critique!
INTRO
8 teens living in present day -names: Mason, Jordan, Jenson, Shava, George, Larry, Merlin, and Jane- in the city of Greenvile, South Carolina are going on a trip to an abandoned school that one of the teens use to go to. The teens get there a little later than what they thought they would, because they had to set up camp so they could comfort themselves before delving in even further than what they had gone.
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The Troubled
Science FictionThis story follows a group of teens who encounter some of the SCP's of the SCP-foundation. It can be interpreted anyway you feel best, i want all the help i need with the characters and the story. If you see something that could be fixed then comme...
