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chapter 46(breathe)

juhi- neil avni is not responding....

neil is shocked...

neil- not responding matlab??
kya matlab hai iska??...(screaming)

juhi- neil surgery successful raha lekin avni ko last moment pe aspenia ho gaya...
humne usse current dekar
uske heart ko activate karne
ki koshish ki lekin she is not
responding....i...i am sry...lekin
a...av...avni is...

neil- stoppp!!!.....just stop it....

saying this he went to the cabin...all went inside...sunheri, dd, juhi...sunheri was crying...and dd was all silent...juhi was feeling bad for not rescuing
avni....he saw avni lying there with no movement...her
heartrate lines were still..neil
looked upto the machine and
laughed...and sat beside avni...and holded her hands...

dd- neil avni....(teary)

neil- yeh machine jhut bol rahi hai na avni??.....yeh ajkal
ke machines bhi na bilkul kharab hai...zinda insaan ko
bhi yeh machine maar dalenge....mujhe pata hai ke tum uthogi.aur mujhe abhi neil kehkar bulaogi....hai na avni??....avni...kuch toh bolo....avni....

dd- neil avni ab nahi uthegi...

neil- chhup kar na yaar...avni ab nahi uthegi lekin kuch der baad uthegi...shhh..meri avni so rahi hai...woh uthegi...kuch der baad uthegi...usse sone do...shhh....dont disturb...

he was not crying....he had believe that she will wake up..

neela maa soul came to avni
body.....and saw neil in a very
bad state....avni soul got out
from his body and saw neela
maa soul...avni became happy
and run towards her.....to hug
her....she told...

avni(teary)- maa.....

she was coming when neela
maa soul stopped her...

neela maa soul- nahi baccha...
nahi....mere paas mat aao...

avni soul- lekin kyun maa??...

neela maa soul- baccha tum
thikk ho gayi thi phir kyun
chhodke chali ayi apne aapko???

avni soul- maa mein last moment pe darr gayi thi aur
meine marne ka faisla liya...

neela maa soul- tum khud akele nahi mari....tumne apne
saath neil ko bhi maar diya...
dekho usse...

avni soul looked to her own
dead body and then to neil....
who was smiling...but there
was a great pain in his smile...

neela maa soul- dekh rahi ho
avni....neil tumhe kaise bula
raha hai...tum zinda nahi ho
lekin phir bhi woh tumhari
aankhein kholne ka intezaar
kar raha hai....pata hai kyun??
kyunki woh tumse zyada pyaar karta hai...uska bharosa mat todo baccha...

avni soul- lekin maa mujhe
aapke paas ana hai....mujhe
aapke paas rehna hai....

neela maa soul- mein toh hamesha tumhare paas thi avni...

avni soul(teary+angry))- toh phir mujhe chhodke kyun gayi aap???

neela maa soul- kyunki woh
meri majburi thi....avni tumhare pyaar ko tumhari zarurat hai...wapas jao baccha..apne neil ke paas....
uski saansein ruki huyi hai avni.....uski saansein wapas de do....jao uske paas...wapas
jao....aur apna wada nibhao...

avni soul(teary)- maa....

neela maa soul- aur khabardar agar dobara neil ko chhodne ke bare mein socha bhi toh....

avni soul was crying and noded her head in no...

avni- nahi...kabhi nahi...

neela maa- aur agar mere bete ko dobra rulaya na toh
mein tumhare kaan kheenchungi....

avni soul- h...haan...

neela maa soul- jao ab....agar tum mere paas ayi toh tum phir kabhi wapas nahi ja paogi...hameha yaad rakhna tumhari neela maa humesha tumhare saath hai..hamesha...

avni soul(crying badly)- i love u maa...

neela maa soul-  love u more
my jaan....

then neela maa soul went away....avni soul get inside her own body....

neil- avni utho na??.....aur kitna soyogi tum??.....

no response....

neil (got angry)- thikk hai...
nahi uthna hai mat utho...mein ab tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga....dekh lena tum...

saying this he was going when avni hold his hands tightly...neil turned back and
was shocked...

neil- av.....avni....

avnis heartrate was started
again....juhi and all were shocked....

neil- av...avni....meri avni...

avni opened her eyes slowly
and juhi checked her heartrate and was shocked...
she is alive...again...neil just
hugged her tighty....avni was
also hugging him tightly and
was smiling....

neil- av...avni...meri avni...tu...
tum thikk ho na??.....

avni blinked her eyes...dd and
sunheri were damm happy...
and juhi was also happy...

avni- ne...neil....

saying this she again got unconsiouss....and neil was
shocked again...

neil- aviniii..avni kya huya??...

so how was it??
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