Challenge: Tone and Word Choice

Set The Opposite Mood

                                  "The snow softly drifted down and landed gently on her grave."

Standing in frigid air while the snow flows down over the grave of who once was my enemy.

                               "Mr. Snider anxiously paced around the classroom as we worked."

Mr. Snider hummed around the classroom while we worked.

                                "I gazed longingly out the window at the children playing outside."

I glared out the window watching the children play knowing that whatever I do I will still be too young to play in the streets. 

(ill never get to play outside!!!)

                           "We bumbled along the path as the wind whispered gleefully in the trees."

We creped upon the path as the howling wind thrusts by and the tall trees creates monsters that surround us. 

                                           "He smiled as the stair creaked familiarly, welcoming his return." 

He frowned as he walked up the creaking stairs that brought him memories of those dangerous times.

 Thanks to my english teacher! Yay!?

Now I want some people to try this out to! Like...

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