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A former thug pulled from the Underground City; her soul is scarred and her heart is cold. Having the opportunity to live in a world away from that hole in the ground, she finds herself fleeing and hoping to leave behind a past that will come to haunt her in the least expected moment. In a world where titans roam every corner, not all dangers wait outside the Walls. And as secrets unfold and bonds are created, she will have to make a choice: to trust her comrades, or to trust only herself.
Galene Magnolia is a mystery. She is wild, dangerous and has little self-control; but she is more than meets the eye. Her past has turned her into the unpredictable woman she is today; she's a tempest about to unleash, change his world completely... and destroy it beyond repair.
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/5
Plot: 5/4
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/4
Voice: 5/5
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/8
Style: 10/9
Organization - Research: 5/5
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/44
Review/Comments by Judge: Very detailed and expressive. An interesting plot with good twists and holes, yet needs work on the editing part which sometimes may get confusing.
