Lets pretend I didn't read the original plot

A good starting point pt 21

"Score 6." Alexander concluded for the third of the reckless contestants.

Hmm a total of 18 that's pretty good. Only one more before me, then I can go home hopefully.

"Mathew," the host calls and the redhead beside me steps forward. He wore denim shorts and an open black jacket with no shirt.

Presumably he intends to show off his abs, but, eh why do I feel that the six pack just is not that impressive?

Eliza looks him over then starts "I'm really not certain what you where attempting to portray with this clothing choice, the theme is not clear and your failing to show off the look. Instead all I'm getting is your own pretty boy image, 3"

That is way harsher then the others? Wonder what he did?

Carlo picked up "you should be aware that the entirety of your performance is judged, including your selection and reflection prior to coming into this room. As such it is a good idea to avoid irrationally insulting other contestants in a misguided attempt to make you seem more important. Mathew, I give you a 3 as you have a decent presence but failed to present the theme of show the clothes."

Alexander shook his head then spoke "The approach you have shown to this competition has not been in the spirit of the completion nor have you presented an outstanding presentation, if you intend to stay in this competition you will need to seriously improve. I give you a 2."

Well it's finally my turn, hopefully it is not to brutal. Also here is hoping that I can avoid falling on my face.

"Rayne," I step forward and the host smiles.

Eliza also smiles before she speaks "I can honestly say that your performance shocked me, you immediately seem to have gotten the point of the exercise. I could feel the reckless air emanating from you as you entered. Moreover you choose a clear and precise style to portray you effect. If anything it is the difficulty in using such a style today that lowers your score. I give it an 8"

"I was very surprised, you looked like you could have come straight from a performance, even the movements entrenched the feel. Though unfortunately such moves would not be appropriate on the runway their are plenty of other areas of modelling where they would be very welcome, I give it a 8." Carlo nodded his head as he spoke.

"When I saw the preparation I was worried that the style would wear you rather than you wearing the style or that you would lack the atmosphere in either direct present or for photo. However, you have completely overthrown that thought with your efforts. I was thinking the variety you presented in your entry images where mere coincidence but it seems you really have the ability to back it up. 7" Alexander concludes.

23 I have the new high score, yay...... ugh I can feel the work load falling on my head to maintain the position enough to complete the goal. Huh, I wonder why the system has been so silent, don't tell me the plot is trying to make a comeback? No wait the plot has changed so hmmmm.