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Hey everyone!
Sorry for the delay—thank you for waiting! This is my first story, so if you notice any mistakes or have suggestions, please drop them in the comments. I'll make sure not to repeat them.
⚠️ Warning:
This story comes entirely from my imagination. Some scenes may feel familiar because many wolf stories share patterns—but don't copy it!
Take no offense: this story contains mature content, violence, cruelty, and strong language. Recommended for 16+ readers.
STARTED: 31/07/2019
FINISHED: ...............
Meet the Pack
Protagonist: Samael Black – Wolf Name: JON / BEAST
Pack: Blood Moon Pack
Alpha (Father): Alexander Black – Dom
Luna (Mother): Arina Black – Sara
Children:
Emma Black – Wolf Name: Selena (eldest daughter)
Samael Black – (first son, our saviour)
Jackson Black – Wolf Name: Ian (youngest son)
Beta: Johnson Brown – Tony
Beta's Mate: Emily Brown – Lyra
Beta's Son: Henry Brown – Edward
Gamma: William Miller – Tom
Gamma's Mate: Shansha Miller – Nova
Gamma's Daughter: Amber Miller – Aurora
Conversation Guide
Human talk: normal text
Wolf mind-link: italic text
ESTÁS LEYENDO
THE BEAST
Hombres LoboHello guys! This is my first story on Wattpad. I hope you love it. If you find any mistakes, please forgive me and feel free to give suggestions. Samael, also called Sammy, is the first son of the great and honorable alpha of the Blood Moon Pack, Al...
