Loyalty and Love (Hobbit FanFic)

Who Are You - Thorin

After a 10 day trek to great east road we finally arrive just outside the Orc cave where Gandalf said they were keeping the girl.

"And you believe she is being held here" Earnur calls out to Gandalf

"Yes" he simply replies with a smile on his face

"Well what are we waiting for" Earnur shouts looking behind him to me

I bend my head down gesturing him to lead the way as we dismount our horses and head to the caves entrance. As we creep into the cave in a single line behind Earnur

Leading the way with Gandalf behind him, we begin to hear the noises of screams in the background. As we turn down the corridor we suddenly arrive at a large open area where fires raw and the noise of tortured souls fill the air.

"Ready?" Earnur whispers as my men and his nod silently

We silently jump off the ledge down into the large open room.

"Prepare for death foul creatures!!!" Earnur screams as the Orcs turn around in surprise

"Now what do we have here...a merry company of men, dwarves, a wizard and a child" a large Orc laughs from across the room looking at the hobbit

"Well shall we begin?" He questions with a loud laugh as a large group of white orcs come charging towards us

With that the fighting begins, Gandalf slays down Orc after Orc with his staff as me and my men charge upon another group of orcs heading our way. With each swing of my sword I take down the orcs as they scream out shout with anger and rage, as Earnur and his men do the same.

"We must go find the girl" Gandalf shout over to me as I finish off the last orcs surrounding us

"Follow me" he orders

We back away from the battle and cross the room heading down another corridor. The corridor goes on for a lifetime dark and wet filled with the screams of pain. We finally come to a large circular room with individual cells around the walls.

"Tilly...Tilly are you hear?" Gandalf begs looking into each cell to only find the distorted bodies laying down dead in the darkness

I suddenly come to last cell to find and skinny frail girl leaning against the wall of her cell, with her knees pulled up to her chest and he skin and hair covered in muck and blood. I lean down to get a better look in when I catch her eye, but she quickly looks away and begins to shake

"It is okay...we have come to rescue you" I assure her as I smash the rusted lock open with a swing of my sword as she looks back at me with fear and confusion

I shout for Gandalf and slowly move into the cell, over to the girl as she then backs away in return.

"I promise you. We are not here to hurt you" I say gently holding out my hand

"Who are you?" She asks staring down at my open hand

HEYY everyone, sorry for the super late delay I've just moved back to uni so been crazy busy but all settled in now and ready to get this story going :)

Know this chapter is a bit short and what not but just wanted to have the battle from thorin aspect. And will update tomorrow night again. I've also uploaded the trailer to the first chapter. Please let me know if it is working and what you think. Im not sure about it :/

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