RAW CHAPTER 1

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RAW

Chapter 1

<<At the Rocky Mountains>>

Ayumi the ogre girl was hungry. She began to search for food but had no luck in finding anything. The only thing present at her sight was rocks and cracks. It was all thin air.

Ayumi: *Signs*

Ayumi: *stomach growls*

Ayumi: Damn.....

Ayumi: I'M SO FRICKIN HUNGRY!!!!!

Ayumi continues to wander around, but still, she had no luck in finding anything.

As her hungry stomach continues to wear her down and frustrate her physically and mentally...

She came upon a fly. Which had landed at her armpit.

A very perverted fly.

The fly gazed at her with a smiley look. Its intents were unknown to her because all she got from the small critter was a sly grin.

She continues to analyze the fly.

Fly: *smells* the stench of this female!

Fly: IT'S ADDICTING~

The fly began sucking her armpit with its proboscis. The stinky sour scent of the ogre girl's unbathed armpit really turns it on in all angles. The fly began to go crazy and sucks even harder as green mucus splattered everywhere.

Fly: I'MMA HAVE EVERY PART OF IT!

The fly shows its money tongue. It licks Ayumi everywhere from top the bottom and left to right. It was ticklish and not pleasurable at all for the ogre girl.

She felt nothing but insect harassment at this point.

Fly: I'MMA LUCKY FLY!!!!!

Before the fly could make another sentence, Ayumi caught her with burning fists of rage. And embarrassment.

"OMG" the fly gazed at her, it was still daydreaming from the stinky heaven it was in. Oh, how short it lasted.

"Please forgive me" the fly pleaded.

Its wings were slightly crooked from the ogre girls grab and now it's nothing more than a perverted fly with no wings. Makes no difference.

Ayumi cautiously analyzed the fly from her palm. This was the first time their eyes met.

The fly tried to make a good impression by showing its best smile. All it wanted was the ogre girl to give it a second chance.

A second chance to suck her pussy.

Ayumi continued to stare at the fly.

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"SQUISH"

R.I.P The fly.


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Author's notes: Thank you for reading the first page of "RAW". This is the light novel version of the comic. which means it will be faster and the story will go ahead of time. It will still have pictures in it, but with no color.

 only sketch and shades. 

 I will try to update the drawing version in the future when i feel like it. But for now, please enjoy the light novel version.


check out my first 5 pages here.

https://tapas.io/series/RAW

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