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A New Hello

Romance

Written by: SassySuxy

Improvements:

I don't have many notes to give; I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into your writing. Just be careful to watch for those tiny mistakes like punctuation and spelling that are easy to go over.

Overall review:

Even with only one chapter in your book so far, thought you did a great job with giving a feel for your book. I love that it's a longer chapter instead of just a few paragraphs and the details you put in were great.

I really enjoyed reading this book and totally recommend it to anyone who's interested!