This book is AGES old. I first started it three years ago, when I was in freaking eighth grade. My writing and storytelling skills have gotten so much better since then, making my other books put this one to shame, so to speak. That's the reason why I'm making the revision of this book (although it's on a hiatus that is close to ending).
This book is terrible not just because the chapters were super short and poorly written at times, but also because I seemed to contradict myself a bit. Many parts of the book seemed very odd or out of place. For example, if this book followed the events of the movie, why weren't Sally and Jack originally dating at the start of my book? THAT'S the stuff I need to change. And don't even get me started on how crazily I portrayed Sally! That's the idea that makes me cringe the most!
My main goal for the revision book, as it usually is for all revision books, is to make the book better and fill many holes and fix any errors that were originally written. To make it easier, comments ANYWHERE in the book are appreciated! What parts did you like, and what should I change? What should I delete, or what could I possibly add in? YOUR feedback, as the readers, is what drives the motivation and ideas behind any revision book. So I would greatly appreciate it if you would comment almost anything that comes to mind while you read that pertains to how events turned out and what parts stuck out in a positive/negative light. Thanks for reading, and I hope you moderately enjoy this terrible book. 🤣
....Please check out the revision book afterward. I don't even care if you wait until it's finished! Don't let this original copy be the one you remember. 🥺
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