WeAllNeedHeroes Reads: Starkit's Prophecy

ALLIANCES

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom

A name already used in Yellowfang's Secret, but the Erins are known for reusing names. They've used Larksong many times.

IceFire-white she cat

See comment on Foxpaw, also, name doesn't make sense, but is a nice name.

ToadRibbit-black—and-white tom

This name, on the other paw...

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat

Another nice name.

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat

Nice name, and nice to know her legs are healed.

BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes

Not a terrible name, but terrible for a tom.

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine

Wrong description, nice name.

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace

Oh, so Foxpaw and Icepaw are not apprentices. And, FoxDaisypaw...

FlamePaw- firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye

Interesting design, but she doesn't have a mentor?

LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes

I don't understand how one can be "bright blue-gray", but I'm not one to judge unrealistic designs. Again, no mentor

The last 2 r starKits siters

So... Starkit was not apprenticed with them? And sisters? They babysit her? Or... Kitsit?

JazzPaw-red she cat with blue eyes and a black tail

I can explain that name away by the fact she may be a former kittypet.

Queens:

Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes mother of Dustpelts kits

Which ones? They've had far too many.

Dawnsparkle-bright tortishell she cat with garguntan blue eye’s mother of Jayfeathers’ ktis, formaly of Shadowclan

Another unrealistic pelt, but possibly means the ginger is brightly colored. On the other paw, Jayfeather, you didn't learn anything from your mother?