1st place
Kiana Ahmadi: The Hooded Hero2nd place
Stories from a Fallen Angel3rd place
Finding Hope
Stories from a Fallen Angel by BloodyTurtleKiana Ahmadi:The Hooded Hero
seo727
Score: 24 points.
Commentary: Everything about this book seemed professional. It had humor, mystery, a tint of rightness.
The plot was very interesting and intriguing, discussing more than one theme.
It really does deserve the first place.Stories from a Fallen Angel
BloodyTurtle
Score: 23/25
Commentary: I had a very difficult decision to make to disociate these two books, but in the end, there was just a little thing that made the difference. I absolutely loved this plot, the action was very well-written.
It started quite forcefully, although there could be more impact of the sentences were to be rearranged. Other than that, it's an amazing book that will stay in my mind for a long time.Finding Hope
DGMaxx
Score: 18/25
Commentary: The storyline was good, the tension too, but there were some things that I remarked. The flow could be improved, as well as the puctuation and grammar.
Too many details, but a good story overall.The Rejected Ones
_LuvHurtz_
Score: 15/25
Commentary: The book is in need of a lot of editing and l've noticed that the author has planned that, but the grammar and punctuation mistakes damage quite a lot the quality of a book which is otherwise full of originality and creativity.
It has potential, but there are things that need to be fixed in order to achieve that.