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Braelyn
First day of school and I'm already ready for summer break to happen again. My name is Braelyn Jones and I'm starting my second to last year in high school 11th grade. Like the average teenage, I hate it. I've spent basically all my life in school and every year just keeps getting worse than the previous one.
It's currently 6:00am and I'm in the bathroom trying to get my long brown hair tamed. Brushes and flat irons cover my bathroom counter as well as bobby pins and combs.
"..... open up!" My younger brother exclaims. I reply with a subtle "shut up you have to be at school in like 3 hours why are you even up?" Yea not so subtle? Oops.
Stuffing every hair product that lay on my counter back into a basket, I exit the bathroom with a smile leaving it all to my brother.
Wanting to look good for the first day of school, I tear apart my closet, coating the floor and chair with clothes that haven't been worn in like forever. Seeing that I picked out white ripped jeans that shouldn't get me dress coded, a maroon top that says 'seriously?' Printed at the top of it and picked out my new clean maroon-ish burgundy converse to complete the look.
I apply some lip gloss before putting it back into my purse. I don't apply any makeup because I just don't like the way it feels or looks on me. Trust me, I'm no Beyonce , but I learned to not care what other people say so I go all natural.
Looking at the clock it reads 6:34. School starts at 7:00 everyday. Who in their right mind would think to torture kids by sending them to school for 8 hours a day, sending them home with 2 hours or more of homework, have us wake up extra early, but then have the nerve to say 'kids should live a stress-free happy life while they still can'. Yea right, I would love to know how to do that.
Anyway I walk downstairs where on the way I grab my earbuds, phone and charger and stuff it into my purse.
"Goodmorning sweetie"'my mom says giving me a kiss on the cheek. "Goodmorning" I say with less enthusiasm because it's so early. Seeing as if my dad already left for work, I decide to make some eggs. Grabbing the skillet, grease and the eggs of course I put the skillet down first turning the fire on, then it putting a small layer of grease on it. Waiting for it to heat up I then add the eggs and wait til they're done.
I grab a plate and put one on for me saving my little brother one as well, I grab my house keys, say goodbye to my mom, and I'm out the door walking to school.
I was almost at school still eating the eggs I made, I was tapped on the shoulder. At first I ignore it but I feel another tap so I turn around to come face with
Zach Herron
Zach has brown hair and rosy pink cheeks so I can never tell if he's blushing or not. From what people talk about in the halls, Zach has a very interesting sense of humor but is shy most of the time. Zach's in the 10th grade so I see him in the halls but never tall to him so I was very curious to see what he wanted.
"Yes?" I ask politely.
"I kinda of-a have a question" he says scratching his neck.
"Go on" I say intrigued. "Is your body McDonalds? Cause I'm lovin' it"
"Yea no. Tip number 1, never use that on a girl because it'll make her think that she's fat."
I say patting him on his shoulder and walking ahead leaving him there in shock.
The day hasn't even gotten started and yet and that happens. If Zach ever uses that pickup line again, he will have some explaining to do.
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If Zach used that pickup line on you, would it work? Thank you for even reading the first chapter of this book, it means a lot.
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