Chapter 9 the loop

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Max's pov:
"This doesn't make any sense.. I made the correct turns.. how am I back here?"
Jay gave tom a concerned look.
I drove off again trying one more time.. praying that just maybe... I went the wrong direction.
But I ended up right back where I originally was.
"Okay enough with this joke... let me drive" said Nate giving me a glare. I could tell he knew.. that maybe this wasn't an elaborate plan. That maybe we were actually stuck out here.
I got out of the car.. and Nathan took my spot.
"Well are you coming?" He said hollering at me.
"No.. there's no point nath.. you know I'm the best with directions.. something isn't right"
"How about you Seev?"
"No mate.. I'm just gonna pass out.. and pray this is just some stupid dream." Without hesistation nath took off.

Nathan's pov:
I drove down the long narrow road again, trying to erase the thoughts of the devil out of my head..
these guys played a lot of pranks on me before but this had to be the lowest and most ridiculous.
I looked down at my phone, no bars of course.
When I looked back up i was in shock.. I saw a girl in a while gown in the middle of the road.. panicking I swerved and drove into a tree....

Toms pov:
"Naths been gone for a while now.. maybe he found the way out?" Said tom unsure.
"Yeah hopefully..."
"There's no way he did.. I'm telling you lads straight up I went the right way.. and it took me right back here. None of this makes any se-nce... " said max stuttering
"I think I know what's going on here.. it's the curse.. its using this time to pick one of us." Said jay
"Who's idea was it to go camping again?"
Said max astonished.
"Toms.."
"Are you fucking daft?? Why in the world would you think going camping would be the best option for a boyfriend that sold their souls away to the devil? Yeah let's go to a secluded area where no one will hear our screams... makes sense." Said max furious.

Nathan's pov:
*beeeeeeeeeeeeeep*
I woke up with my head on the steering wheel. Blood stained on the fabric.
A huge throbbing pain in my head..
A few minor cuts.. but nothing too serious.
"Who the fuck was that?"
I looked around outside.. but the darkness had taken over.
I turned on my phones flashlight.. and shined it around.
The girl was gone.
I got out of the car hesitantly.
"Hello?"
I yelled.
But nothing. In the distance I could see a lit fire. That must be where the boys are. I start limping away in that direction. Hoping this nightmare would end. The closer I got the more confused I was. I heard music., gospel music. I hid behind a tree realizing that wasn't our campsite..
Around the fire were at least 6 men in a circle chanting and interlocking hands with one another.
They all wore black robes.. and none of them showed their faces.
Another man appeared with a woman.
She had a bag over her head.. screaming and kicking.
"What is going on..." I whispered to myself.
The chanting got louder.. and before I knew it they were forcing the girl in the fire. Flames engulfing her skin.
"STOP" I wanted to say but no words came out, I was frozen.
I felt a hand caress my back.
I slowly turned around,
"Devlin?"

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