The next day
I get ready for the choosing ceremony and go with my family. We get seated and Jeanine does her little speech. I only pay attention to Beatrice, who picks Dauntless and her brother, who picks Erudite.
"Jessica Pure" my sister gets up and picks Candor. Wow what a surprise...not.
"Fiona Pure" I get on stage and cut my hand.
I am not kind
I am not mean
I am not a coward
But I am brave
My blood lands on the coals.
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We all stand and run down the stairs. I see Beatrice and catch up to her.
"Hey Beatrice!" I say.
"Beatrice's was a shy Abnegation girl. This is Tris, a brave out going girl." She says. I smile.
We get outside and see a train coming. "Oh god." I say.
"You're the only Amity transfer, ya know." Tris says.
"Well you're the only Abnegation transfer." I reply. We start running next to the train. Bea- I mean Tris, jumps on the train and holds out her hand. I grab it and get on. Still hold her arm I say, "Well Fiona was a bubbly Amity girl, right now I'm Fia, a brave, strong girl." I start shaking her hand. We smile at each other and sit down
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Divergent-Fiona's story
FanfictionWhat if there was an extra character in divergent? What if Tris wasn't the first jumper? What if tris wasn't scored first? What if Al hadn't died? What if Fiona was in the story divergent?
