This is so adorable! We love that you gave our Art Club a try even though you only just started ^^

There isn't much we can say because it's so cute, but perhaps in future you could maybe make the shapes of these 4 elements different, instead of just the colours ^^ Love the additional calligraphy!

QueenFaery

QueenFaery

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The colours of this piece all complement each other well--so great work! The shading of the hair might need to be blended more--especially the lighting on her lashes. The nose should also be a little further to the right, since her face is tilted. But otherwise, this was lovely--we love the touch of her flower crown and background!

seasonal_dragon

Great work on this--we love her colour scheme and design! But of course there's always room for improvement ^^ 

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Great work on this--we love her colour scheme and design! But of course there's always room for improvement ^^ 

The arms are a little thin in comparison to her torso and legs so maybe widen them a little. Her hands are proportionally much too small, especially compared to the rest of her body. A good reference tip would  be to compare the size of your own hand with your face or chest and you'll be able to see what we mean ^^ Her hair and clothes are intricate and a well thought out design, which we love.

A way to make the background more realistic, would be to add more grey undersides to the clouds. It's a very simple but effective way!

Bliim-chan234

Bliim-chan234

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