Wonderful work with her pose! But one thing to focus on for next time would be her hair ^^ 

Try observing the shape of your own hair and how it moves and use that as a starting reference point. The place where her hair flows over her shoulders should be more smooth and follow the curve of her shoulder instead of being completely straight (especially since her head is turned). Just flick your own hair over your shoulder and you'll see what we mean!

The fairy's wings looks really nice and we loved the effort you put into the beautiful background ^^

Lystiel

Great job on this piece, her hair and face are very cute! But some things to keep in mind for next time is your colour palette

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Great job on this piece, her hair and face are very cute! But some things to keep in mind for next time is your colour palette. All the colours you have chosen are highly saturated and clash with each other on the drawing--nothing really sticks out and nothing really falls back. Maybe stick to a maximum of four colours (shades of that colour not included within that four) which are more muted for next time, and the piece will come together wonderfully ^^

Your lineart and design of the flowers are wonderfully intricate and we love that!

PyraFyre

Another adorable piece of work! The only thing that could use a little love is the anatomy ^^  More specifically, the head shape is a little too large and the legs should be as long (or longer) and slightly wider than the arms

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Another adorable piece of work! The only thing that could use a little love is the anatomy ^^ More specifically, the head shape is a little too large and the legs should be as long (or longer) and slightly wider than the arms.

The shape of the bottom half of her body should also be a little larger, or at least the same size as her upper half. 

MoonAndStars100

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