Sample of First Chapter

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"Ugh...why did I agree to do this...
*sighs* next time they should pay me."
I walk inside the bar and sit down next to some guy who smells like whiskey and smoke. The bartender comes up to me and says, "ID."
I give him my fake ID wondering how many times I've done this before...
"What would you like?"
"Dr. Pepper with some ice please." I looked around and found my target.
"Found the target, going to get a better look," I say into my earpiece.
"Roger that, be careful Ash, he's not a friendly guy when it comes to women."
I chuckle and say, "It's not my first rodeo, Josh."
I turned the earpiece off before Josh could reply, and walked up to my target.
"Hello," I say in a British accent, "What's your name?" I'm a little nervous, but I play it cool and keep smiling. He looks up at me and smiles with ugly, yellow teeth and says, "Why hello there...tell me your name first baby doll."
I wanted to throw up, but instead I said, "Fine...my name is Lori, now what's your name?"
While saying that he was moving his eyes over my body with a hungry look, and I knew what he wanted to do. I stayed calm as he answered with, "My name is Joel, say you wouldn't want to go to my house for a bit would you?"
I started to think fast about how I could avoid that, "Umm...yes I would love to, but wouldn't you like to have drinks first?"
I really hoped he would say yes. "Ehh...sure why not, it's not like we don't have all night anyways." I laughed a bit and flirtily said, "Yeah..haha."
Gosh I really need to work on interacting with others more.
Once he orders a drink, I get my soda and drink some. He looks at me hungrily while we wait for his drink. Once his drink came I quickly spilled my drink on him.
"Oh my gosh sorry I'm such a klutz!"
He looked a little pissed but says, "Err..it's fine I'll go clean up."
Once he's out of sight I take out roofies and put them in his drink. It sizzles for a bit, and then returns to normal. Joel came back and said, "Did you miss me?"
I laughed at his stupid joke and nodded. I put my drink up with his and said, "Cheers!"
I waited eagerly for him to take a drink, and then finally he took a big gulp of his drink. The night ended pretty much with him knocking out, and me carrying him to my brother's van before anyone saw us. "You did great Ash!" I rolled my eyes and said, "Duhhh...of course I did good, and he's surprisingly a lot lighter than he looks." Josh laughed, but before he answered my aunt came out of nowhere and said, "It's cuz you're a badass little lady." I laughed at her words and said, "You never cease to flatter me at weird times Aurora." She giggled and then we all left to to drop the target off at headquarters.
We got home later and I ran to my room and collapsed on my bed..
"Ahh..I love you bed, but too bad I never lay on you since I'm busy so much."
I groaned and saw that it was 12:00 AM..."Dang it I have to start school tomorrow...actually today..welp what can ya do."
I say goodnight to my dog Mishka and go to sleep, already dreading tomorrow.

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I uhh...tried my best in this little sample. I'm still working on the first chapter soo let me know how this was. If you liked it..well then I'm glad you liked it and if you didn't well...it's fine.
P.s. I would appreciate any constructive criticism if anyone has any.

Love,
         Rose Thorn Wolf

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