Playing The Part (please help with editing)

Authors Note

Hi. 
So you obviously think this sounds like an interesting story or you didn't read the blurb but you clicked 'read' anyways. 
This story will change a lot during this whole process. 
I have planned the whole story already but I haven't written it all. 
Now you guys come into the equation. So what I would appreciate you guys doing is reading this and handing me back any editing or feedback or just ideas you may have. Things you may want to change. 
I will not publish those changes until the end and that will be in a separate book so that you guys and I can see how much the story has grown. 
I am still in the writing process so bear with me as I get the chapters out. 

NOTE: You guys do not by any means have to edit this. You can just read it for pleasure but I would also love feedback as that is one of the main reasons I put it up here. 

Along with your edits, when it is done I will edit it as well so the story will be a lot different by the end of this process. 

So sit back and enjoy reading. I hope you fall in love with the characters I have and please don't be plain rude, that's not nice. I definitely consider myself a rookie writer being only young (#stillinschool) and I know my writing sucks. I know that I have inconsistencies but I would love for you guys to edit this. 

That's all from me so yeah....