If Kennedy Lived: An Alternate History

If Kennedy Lived: An Alternate History Extra!!!

Jack's face went pure red. "And I wouldn't know what to do without her," he muttered, looking away.

OK, now that I've dealt with the mandatory story content, here comes one Hell of an Author Notes segment.

Special Features

Quotes/References:

A list of all of the quotes and references I included in the fic, sorted by chapter.

Chapters:

Spookily close parallel to a scene from Naruto. I forget which episode exactly (it was during the Chunin Exam), but replace Jackie with Sakura, John with Curse Mark lv 1 Sasuke, and the apes with the Sound Genin...it's kind of scary that I wasn't even planning this one.

'I didn't want to lose you like I lost Darkness.' Reference to Star Wars, specifically The Empire Strikes Back, if I remember right. I may not have the line exactly right, but close enough that most people I've asked got it. As soon as I found out that Mark Hammel (Luke Skywalker) was voicing Malefor, I knew I had to fit at least one Star Wars reference, and Obi Wan's line seemed to the best fit.

When I was planning the conversation between Jack and Chief Curry, it felt very Harry Potter, especially the part where Jack's father was one of the richest men in the country, but it felt right.

'My studies of the Forbidden Arts have granted me with powers that some would deem...unnatural.' Another Star Wars reference, I hope I don't need to explain more.

'Brace yourself, you're about to become very popular.' The line came from Disney/Pixar's Robots. I know that the movie has nothing to do with my story, but I liked the line and it is something Johnson would say.

'Ready, steady, go!' From the Fullmetal Alchemist opening by the same name. Basically I made it the Front Guard's battle cry.

'sweet girl...bad judge of character.' Jim Carey in the live action Grinch movie. No particular reason for using, it just fit.

Jackie's crack about them being chained together is a History reference; I'm also commenting on how in eleven chapters I'd hardly done anything where John and Jackie weren't together, so it's kind of a shot at myself. (btw, that chain was nothing but trouble for about 90 percent of the game)

'It's been a long time, Mr. President.' I toyed around with making an Advent Children reference here, but I decided against it and changed the line, partly because I wanted to save that for later, partly because I'd get hurt if certain people I know read Talon quoting Sephiroth.

'This is gonna be...interesting.' The Star Wars TV series. This one wasn't intentional (it's actually something I say myself when I think a situation's gone bad or is about to), but again, the parallel is there so it works. Also, like I said I'm trying to fit in some SW references.

'Oh yeah, real sure.' Quote from the first Bionicle movie. Once again, just switch the characters and you have the same scene.

'It's impossible...nothing works!' Blatant .Hack reference. From the first game, when Orca is fighting Skeith and none of his attacks hurt it.

'Ready, steady, go!'

In case anyone doesn't know, Dual Techs are from Crono Trigger (and I think Crono Cross but I never got to play it so I'm not sure). Since many of them rely on mixing different elemental powers, it just kind of makes sense that the Americans could use them.

'Stand together, and draw strength from each other.' I mentioned earlier in the story that Maria seems a bit like Ignitus (in the Legend of Spyro), and so I decided to have her say the Fire Guardian's last words.

'Arise, my new apprentice.' I shouldn't even have to explain this one.

These are all of the ones that were intentional and a couple that I caught after I put them down. Review on my story now, please!!!

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Soundtrack: Just a few songs that go with the story and/or characters.

Black Fire (piano remix): during the battle with Dark Jackie

Raising Fighting Spirit: defending the village; starts when Jack, Bobby, and Jackie leave the prison

Strong and Strike: Bobby's battle theme

[Sango's Theme]: in the forest, when Jack is comforting Jackie.

Wind: ending song

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Deleted Scene: Here's a scene from Chapter 11 that was cut out for story purposes.

What's with this headache? For the last hour or so Jackie Kennedy had had a dull throb in the back of her head. Come to think of it, it started just after Bobby gave me this necklace...

You still haven't figured it out? A strangely familiar voice sounded in Jackie's mind. I thought you were some kind of genius. I mean I am, after all.

Wha? The pain had spiked for a moment when the voice appeared, and she shook her head trying to ease it. What's going on? Who are you?

The voice laughed softly, accompanied by another spike of pain. It also felt like the necklace was heating up. I'm you, or at least a part of you.

Jackie shook her head again, blinking in confusion. What do you mean? Who are you?

I hate repeating myself, you know...

"Jackie," Jack asked. "Are you alright?"

"I'm fine," the First Lady lied.

Stop toying with her. Jackie recognized this voice.

Darkness?! But how?

She really isn't that bright, the first voice broke in, is she? Well, just to stop you from repeating yourself like an idiot, you can call me Shard. And as for what I am...let's just say that I'm the part of you you'd rather say doesn't exist. And I'd like to say, it's good to get out again after so long.

Shard, Darkness broke back into the conversation. Stop playing around; we have work to do.

Yes, My Lord.

Suddenly, the pain became so great that Jackie fell to the ground, clutching at her head and crying in pain. Then she felt her consciousness being pushed back as Shard began to take control. At the same time she once again felt Darkness' dark power flowing through her from the pendant, which was now glowing purple.

"Jackie!" Jack knelt down next to her.

"No," the First Lady moaned, feeling her control of her body slipping away. "No!"

Jack reached for the pendant, but the dark energy was too strong and he had to pull his hand away.

Yes, Shard taunted, pushing her control further, while Jackie's body began to grow darker in size.

Shard, Darkness commanded. Deal with the lady first, then raze the White House to the ground.

With pleasure!

No! Jackie fought vainly, putting everything she had into forcing Shard back, and resisting Darkness' control. But it was no good; with the amulet bolstering them, Jackie didn't have the strength to prevail.

Poor girl, Shard thought in a mocking tone. She doesn't want to watch her friends butchered. How about this, little Jackie. Jackie's vision began to darken. Go to sleep, and when you wake up it will all be over...

No! Stop! Jackie fought with all she had, but was powerless to resist Shard's spell. "Ready for Round 2?" she heard herself ask as everything went black...

You know how the rest of the scene goes. I put some real thought into a split personality that takes over when Jackie is in Dark Form, but the more I looked at it, the less I liked the idea. It would have been too confusing to write, and it sounds like I'm saying that Jackie's innocent because she really never did anything, when we know that she did, albeit under Darkness' influence. That's why she feels so guilty.

Well, now I'm really done. I'm already writing the sequel.