I'm sorry I'm only able to critique the first two chapters. Though I did add to my library and voted!:)
Things I didn't like: (Sorry every critique is going to have at least one bad thing.)
*It seems like there's a lot happening in one chapter maybe slow it down a little?
*The beginning is very different. Not bad, or anything just not what I was expecting.
Things I did like: :D
*Its not your typical cliche story the main character is a hard worker and I have a feeling strong willed.
*I really like the way you took your time describing things. "The beads of sweat rolled down my cheek..." It really gave me a picture.
*The cover is stunning! It really intrigued me, though you might want to put "You're you. Don't let them change you." In larger or darker text because, you can't really see it. I do like the idea of having that there though!
Overall, I give this 4/5 stars. Just slow it down a little.:)
