I've just edited the first chapter, here it is. Tell me if you see any mistakes!
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"If availability of ammo is all you care about, then the .22 is the way to go." Jay and his group were out looking for supplies for camp blue sky when they came upon Sketchy and Skeezy. An odd pair, but they always pull through when it comes to trading."But if you really want to make an impression, check out this smoke wagon." Walking over to Addy, Sketchy pulls out a gun handing it to her. Checking out the weight, Addy frowns.
'Guess she doesn't like it.' Jay thought as he scanned the area for Z's. It's been quiet lately, and it's never quiet for long in the apocalypse.
"I was thinking something more silent, like a club. And sharp." Addy says as she hands the gun back. Sketchy nods his head, agreeing with her, like any salesman would do when a customer doesn't like what they're given.
Walking over to his car, Sketchy goes to look for something that is to Addy's liking. "Yeah, I like how you think. Silent but effective, huh?" Opening the back of his car, Sketchy pulls out a metal bat with spikes on the end. Jay looks over to Addy and gives her a nod in approval. The bat looked brutal.
Taking a hold of the bat, Addy tested it out on the air. "I made it myself, I call it 'The Z Wacker.'" 'I bet it took him a while to come up with that.' "You start with an aluminum bat , then customize it for the task at hand." Handing the bat to Jay, Addy walks over to discuss trade. Jay's stabbing the ground when Doc and Skeezy catch his attention.
"How about a straight across trade? A dozen of these aspirin, for a dozen of these reloaded .223's." Doc offered. Thinking about the deal, Skeezy shook his head pointing at the aspirin. Walking over to them, Jay leans on 'The Z Wacker', using it as support.
" You can't kill a zombie with aspirin." He said fidgeting. Taking the open space beside Doc, Jay decides to cut into the argument.
"Well you can't kill a fever with a bullet, and they ain't making anymore aspirin." He explains, looking up at Skeezy. Doc throws him a thankful smile. Fidgeting some more, Skeezy looks to Jay then back to Doc.
"Make it a dozen Oxycontin and you got yourself a deal." Jay scoffs and looks up at Doc to see his reaction.
"I'd have to take a dozen Oxycontin before I make that deal. How about some meth? Huh? You want some crystal? I baked it myself?" Skeezy face goes from excited to disgusted.
"That same pink crystal stuff you made before? No, that stuff gave me an axe to the skull headache."
"No, that's what the aspirin's for." Getting bored with their argument, Jay walks over to Addy, who's done talking with Sketchy. He hands her bat back andI walks over to Sketchy.
"Hey, you got any strong light metals? Maybe some screws?" He asks. Looking in his trunk, Sketchy pulls out a semi small sheet of metal. Jay takes it from his hands and tests out it's durability. It was strong. Light too. "What is it?" Jay asks, looking over it more closely.
Putting his hands on his hips, Sketchy shrugs his shoulders. "I have no idea. Picked it up from the side of the road, thought it would be useful in the future. Looks like I was right." Handing the metal back, Jay gives him a questioning look.
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Little Boy Blue {10kxMaleOC}
FanfictionAn apocalypse never did seem appealing and it sure as hell isn't now that it's here. With one bad dye job from before the end, and one useful leg, Jay's in one hell of a ride when the crew leaves Camp Blue Sky for California. He'll be fine though...
