Asriel Dreemurr, a Reborn Fanfiction

Rebirth

I sat in the flowers, crying. I couldn't feel anything. Knowing that I was going to die again, I sat there, waiting for the inevitable transformation back into a flower. The residual Determination from the souls was already fading, and I could feel my body turning into dust. I didn't want to let go.

I sensed someone behind me. I could feel the Determination radiating off of their SOUL.

"Go away, Frisk! Don't you have anything better to do? Someone- no, something like me shouldn't have mercy! You take care of Mom and Dad for me, okay? There's nothing you can do for me--" I choked on my own tears, knowing that the Angel of the Underground was trying to SAVE me.

"Asriel Dreemurr, you silly goat! I'm not going anywhere without you!" They lifted my head and smiled at me. They suddenly slid their arms into an embrace, surprising me.

"Um, Frisk, why is your SOUL visible?" They only smiled wider, and I knew what they were doing.

"No. No, Frisk! Don't sacrifice your life for me! I'm already dead! Chara is dead! There's nothing left for me here! Don't waste your life!" Frisk laughed, tears streaming down their own face.

"I'm not wasting my life, Asriel! I'm SAVING yours!" And with that, they grunted, and I stood there, horrified, as the red SOUL ripped itself into two pieces. But it didn't shatter, like it was supposed to do... I couldn't even move as I felt one half enter my body. The life and emotions that I felt in that instant, I couldn't even describe it. Frisk let the other half return to their body. We collapsed in the flowers, Frisk because exerted quite a bit of energy keeping me alive, and me because I was alive! Alive! The dust that had already fallen away fused back into my body, and I felt whole! I could see Mom and Dad again! I felt tears streaming down my face again, but they weren't tears of sadness, they were tears of joy. Joy! I could feel again! I never felt so happy! Before they passed, out, I took Frisk's hand.

"Thank you. Thank you for this second chance." Frisk smiled and passed out, and I sat there, feeling the draft from the now destroyed barrier blow on my face. I closed my eyes, and eventually fell asleep myself.

Author's Note: I would really  appreciate some comments telling me what you like and what you DON'T about my fan fiction. I'm kind of a novice author, and I'm always trying to get better. Plus, I'd just like to know there's people who like what I write. Thanks for reading!

PS: I see Frisk and Chara as female, but I will continue to use the they/them pronouns Radiation (Toby Fox) Used in the game.