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"Making Moves"

{The scene starts off with Jason in the kitchen looking for food to eat in the cabinet}

[Jason] We never have anything to eat in here. {slowly closes cabinet and looks in freezer} I guess I'll just make some frozen fries

{scene cuts to Dennis in his room playing Xbox}

[Dennis] Ahhhhh!! Come on man that was not fair!! You know I should have made that shot {flicks stick like he made a shot} OH YEAHH!!! TAKE THAT! Swishhhhhh

{scene cuts to Quik Johnny J in the studio}

[Quik Johnny J] {bobs head while listening to music} Yeah man, this track is dope. Do you have any idea how much money we gonna make on this one?? BIG BUCKS! Lets do it again from the top

{scene cuts to Bloody Nose making a transaction at the head of a table}

[Blood Bath] I need my money now! You said you would have it to me on the fifth. Its the sixth and guess what?? I DON'T HAVE MY MONEY!! Now charles either you get me my money or {slice neck hand motion} Get him outta here!

{scene cuts to Jason making fries}

[Jason] Ayyyye! Dennis you want some fries?? It's enough for the both of us to have some

[Dennis] Um nah man I'm good.

[Jason] Aight bro. {phone rings} Hello?

[Tanisha] Hey I was wondering if you are free tonight. I mean it is our 4 month anniversary and you haven't even called me all day. I would expect you to at least talk to me or something. Also what happened to dinner because you said you were taking me to that expensive restaurant "Maggiano's".

[Jason] Baby I forgot I'm sorry. Happy aniversary I'll take you out later. I got to go. Love ya {ends call and sighs} How in the world am I supposed to find the money for this? {thinks and looks at phone} Well I guess there is one way.

{scene cuts to Dennis getting a phone call}

[Dennis] Hello? Ahh yes this is Dennis Gonzalez. Oh wow that's great. No problem. Thanks for calling! {runs downstairs happily} BRO!! I got the scholarship to Stanford. We finally gonna make it out da hood. Imma be highly educated and rich. Finna be rolling round in dat Rolls Royce. {notices Jason is deep into texting} Um what's wrong?

[Jason] Nothing {still texting}

[Dennis] Um you shure? Because any other time you da main one tryna get out da hood. Come on bruh

[Jason] Ain't nun wrong wit me! {walks off and takes phone call}

{scene cuts to Blood Bath answering call}

[Blood Bath] Hello? Yeah this him. Why you wanna know? What?! Dis is Jason? Yeah of course I got some shipments for ya. How much you need? Aight just come down to the warehouse and I gotcha.

[Jason] Hello. Is dis Blood Bath? Aye yo dis Jason. Yeah its me. I was wondering if you got some shipments I could deliver. I need some quick cash. Um I don't know yet but I'll tell you when I get there. {looks up price on google} What in the world?! Im broke I can't afford this. It will probably add up to a couple thousand. Come on man!!

{scene cuts to Jason walking up to the warehouse and entering Bloody Noses "office"}

[Jason] Aye thanks man I really needed this money. So i finally figured out the price and I'm gonna need around 30k.

[Blood Bath] 30k!! You expect to get 30k in 2 days?! You must be outta yo mind. I knew I shouldn't have answered that call. You over here wasting my time

[Jason] Well um maybe you could like just give me the money and I'll pay you back on a certain day?

[Bloody Nose] Now listen here. I just murdered someone because they didn't pay me on time. And guess how much that was over?? 5k. So me giving you 30k!! I better have my money on the exact minute of the exact hour of the day that I want it back. So give me my money in 2 days. If not then say goodbye. Now get out of here. {hands him briefcase with money}

[Jason] Thanks! I'll have your money {walks out} Oh god here we go another problem . How am I supposed to get 30k in 2 days? Nope nope nope. {sees Quik Johnny J and walks the other way}

[Quik Johnny J] Aye buy my mixtape. Please man?? It's just a selection of 7 songs. They are pretty dope if you ask me.

[Jason] Man I got other things to worry about than this. Get outta here

[Quik Johnny J] I saw you leaving Blood Bath's warehouse. What happened? Did one of his goons attack you? I've never been in there before. How was it?

[Jason] Look! Nothing happened he just gave me 30k and I have to pay him back in 2 days. Now here's a 5. Get outta my face {shoves 5 dollar bill into camera}

{scene cuts to Dennis packing while Jason's phone rings}

[Dennis] Hello? Um who? The infamous drug lord? Oh um yeah sorry I forgot. So um whatcha need? Shipments? Of like....... Drugs? Yeah sure I'll be down there in a sec. Aight, bye

{Jason walks in}

[Dennis] So why is the infamous drug lord Blood Bath calling you and saying he has shipments that you can deliver. SHIPMENTS OF DRUGS! You know if mom and dad were around they wouldn't want this happening.

[Jason] Im doing what I have to do. You want food on that table right? So if selling drugs is what I have to do then imma do it. {texts bloody nose: Sorry nevermind cant deliver em}

{scene cuts to Jason getting ready for his date}

[Jason] Aye Dennis tell me if this looks bad. No? Okay good. I think I'm ready. Imma just text her to make sure she's ready. {texts Tanisha: You ready?}

[Jason] Okay she's ready. See ya Dennis!

[Dennis] Aight man! See ya! Have fun

{as jason is walking outside he gets shot}

{police calls Dennis}

[Police] Hello is this Dennis Gonzalez, the brother of Jaosn Whittman? Yes I am sorry to inform you that your brother has been shot and killed today. Please come down to the station to fill out some paperwork. Goodbye

{the phone falls from Dennis's hands}

[Dennis] Here is the paperwork {hands officer the work}

{scene cuts to Dennnis grabbing a box and walking out of the door}

[Dennis] Well I guess I'm going to college. I'm doing this for you bro! Love you Jason.

THE END

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 30, 2016 ⏰

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