The Adventure of a lifetime

1.Party of victory

Hi this is my first amour-shipping
Story smutty type thing so I hope of the best wish me luck, I'm sorry for any mistakes on the characters or Pokemon or anything else please tell me my mistakes

Third person
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"Pikachu use thunder bolt!" The yellow mouse used its attack onto mega-gardavour. "Use moonblast to counter that thunder bolt" shouted diantha. "Garda" A ball of light floated in the air the beams of light started to rain down on pikachu. Pikachu successfully defended itself. "Pikachu use electroball!" From its tail pikachu created a ball of lightning and shot it at mega-gardavour. The attack hit a critical hit and gardavour feinted. There was a loud cheer from the crowd as it was clear ash had won. The referee shouted "all of dianthas Pokemon have been defeated that leaves ash the winner there fore the new champion of kalos!"

The Pokemon centre

Reporters from around the world have come to kalos the watch the final battle. Of corse there is always a down side of being famous. Fans. And LOTS of them.
"Hey ash can you sign my picture?"
"Hey can you sign my pokeball?" "Can you kiss my baby?" "Yes, no and yes." Replied ash with a smile on his face. The woman with her baby walked off sadly. On the other side of the Pokemon centre stood the hyperactive bonnie, electric genius Clemont and kalos queen Serena. Ever since the professors summer camp when serina and ash were seven she had a crush on him. She wanted to confess to him they she loved him but when she tried to hint towards it with ash he was always to dense.

A girl came up to ash and said "please can you be my girlfriend I want to show you somthing in my room."  she said in a slow voice. "Ummm,  I don't know" he said. Serina herd all of this and stormed over and told the young girl and said "no he's not interested in you or any one else". She grabbed ashes hand and took him to their room in the Pokémon centre. "Thanks serina I didn't know how to get out of that one, you saved me."
"Meh it was nothing." Replied serina. "I think I'm going to sleep the rest of the day I'm really tired." Ash sat down on the bed when serina  tripped and fell on top of him and their lips collided.....

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Dun dun dun, sorry it's quite short
But with school and all I don't have all the time in the world.
So see you in the next chapter!
(By the way ,comment, I need some ideas from you guys in the comments ^^)
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