Mind Games

INTRO:

My name is Ezra. I am 21 years old and i have a younger sister named Evelyn and she is 16. Our parents died in a car accident about 2 years ago. So my sister lives with me now. Evelyn is the only family i have left in the world. She means everything to me. I would die if anything happened to her.

Chapter 1:

Howling of the wind. Rain pounding against my window. I woke up to the sounds of breaking glass. I hear screams coming from the room beside me. I jump out of bed and run to the door. It's locked. "Evelyn?" I yelled. "Evelyn, please unlock the door!" Not a sound came from within. So i started to break down the door. After the third try, the door fell down with a thud. I looked around the room. She's no where in sight. My heart stops as i realized my sister has been taken.

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