DAPHNIE THE DOLPHIN IN :THE MISSING FIN (Edited)

DA MIDDEL

So one day Daffnie was swimming with her friend hope . They were talking about the sea and then hope said " Daffnie why do Fishermen always run away when they catch one of us and we talk" then Daffnie said "I don't know hope". Then Daffnie looked over her shoulder and said "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOPE I LOST MY FIN"! So Daffnie said "I have to make a replacement" so then Daffnie swam to the bottom of the ocean and swam up as fast as she could and then jumped into the air and grabbed the nearest sail from a sailboat and bring it back down. She said to hope " this might do the trick" Daffnie said and tied the sail on her back "maby" hope said . A few days later Daffnie woke up and looked over her shoulder the sail was gone! Daffnie swam as fast as she could to tell her mom all that had happened and her mom suggested that she used these things Caledonia paper mache Daffnie said "that's a great idea" and went and dressed like a human and got stuff for paper mache and made the fin then Daffnie said "we will see if it works in the morning

I am disappointed in my own writing I mean just the logic in this doesn't make sense........ WELLL whatever it's just a story

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